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Author: | Ánië Súrion [ September 12th, 2007, 8:26 pm ] |
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WARNING: Big huge colossal giant monstrous Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End spoilers ahead!!! If you don't wanna know then don't read! So...basically I've gotten really attached to James Norrington over the last month or so. I felt absolutely terrible about his death, and the more I thought about it the worse it hurt. Finally the sadness culminated in this free-verse...poem...thing, which I hope doesn't suck too badly... RIP Admiral Norrington, we won't forget you. ![]() Hero James Norrington you were a hero though not all would think so but the truth is were it not for you Will and Elizabeth would never have been together. You loved her enough to let her go to be with him He’s a pirate though she had made you a promise (a false promise) you gave her up to a pirate. You wished them the best of luck not knowing they’d need all they could get and walked off with your broken heart to hunt a Sparrow. But then you failed everything was lost crew commission and life. Not dead but might as well be. What has the world done to you? Finally the Sparrow came out of hiding and you joined him she was there too Elizabeth After all she’d done you still loved her but now she was marrying him. She was following Turner Her latest fiance but you knew there was a spark between her and Sparrow nothing that would last but still a spark a single treacherous spark. The Chest is found and so is Turner. She looks so happy with him your heart aches she was almost yours... And then the tide turned. No longer a pushover no longer a servant The dark side of ambition Get the heart to Beckett get your life back lead the Dutchman’s crew away from the others especially her... You must have something to trade The heart for the letters your mission accomplished. An old friend reappears This is a beautiful sword you have your life back or do you? Stationed on the Dutchman you thought she was dead but you find her again alive Elizabeth You didn’t know her father was dead you thought he’d left for England Did Lord Beckett tell you that? Now she thinks it was you that you helped kill her father. You didn’t know which side you’d chosen. Now you do. You make a choice you release them all of them Choosing a side you lead them out and let them go I will follow but the alarm is sounded she must escape she must you have to let her go this is your destiny Our destinies were entwined, Elizabeth You finally kiss her softly like the gentleman you are all your life you’ve waited for this But never joined It can never be you know that she knows that she loves him only him. She starts to go you cut the rope you’ve saved her your job is done. She calls your name one last time James! You turn and then pain agony darkness closing in on you your last act a thrust of your sword but you miss. Jones is still alive but soon you won’t be one last gasp one final thought Elizabeth... and then no more. Some may forget what you did but others will always remember you. Rest in peace James Norrington a hero in life and death. |
Author: | Drew's Destiny [ September 12th, 2007, 9:43 pm ] |
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I really enjoyed reading your free poem. I flowed extremely well, was long but not too long, and it really caught the feel of the character, James Norrington, and the feeling of his once after his death. It was truely beutiful. Wonderful job! Thank you very much for sharing it with us. ![]() |
Author: | Ánië Súrion [ September 12th, 2007, 10:45 pm ] |
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Thanks, Drew! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Calloniel (PD) [ September 13th, 2007, 9:54 pm ] |
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Well, Drew said it all... that was a beautiful poem from our dear James' point of view! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Ánië Súrion [ September 14th, 2007, 1:50 am ] |
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Thank you, PD! I'm glad you liked the quotes, it just started out as random but I've discovered I like italicized stuff in poems because it adds impact. ![]() |
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