You would happen to have been inspired by the current time of year would you
:nod: Very good! And you made it rhyme without it become unnatural. Something that happens often and annoys me no end (because poems don't have to rhyme
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I can't help comparing it with my style; because it isn't like mine in style, but it seems very similar in inspiration and intention.
basically, I like it, I just tried to give more than that, because I know how someone saying they like it isn't particularly useful
Good work, sir!
I can imagine it being told to little kids, because when I read it, it seemed kind of like something I might have heard when I was little.
