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Author:  [ m e m ] [ February 10th, 2008, 7:25 pm ]
Post subject:  A Teenager wrote this...

This poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital . It was sent by a medical doctor - Make sure to read what is in the closing statement AFTER THE POEM.



SLOW DANCE

Have you ever watched kids

On a merry-go-round?

Or listened to the rain

Slapping on the ground?

Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?

Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?

You better slow down.

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

Do you run through each day

On the fly?


When you ask How are you?

Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done

Do you lie in your bed

With the next hundred chores

Running through your head?

You'd better slow down

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

Ever told your child,

We'll do it tomorrow?

And in your haste,

Not see his
sorrow?

Ever lost touch,

Let a good friendship die

Cause you never had time

To call and say,'Hi'

You'd better slow down.

Don't dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere

You miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry through your day,

It is like an unopened gift....

Thrown away.

Life is not a race.


Do take it slower

Hear the music

Before the song is over.


This young girl has 6 months left to live, and as her dying wish, she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the fullest, since she never will.

She'll never make it to prom, graduate from high school, or get married and have a family of her own.

Author:  Darrell [ February 11th, 2008, 6:44 am ]
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Damm...

...

...

That is incredibly sad. And also a fantastically good poem. *can find no further suitable words*

:'( :notworthy:

Author:  mephiston, lord of death [ February 12th, 2008, 3:48 pm ]
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I agree Chief Librarian. Moving beyond words.....

Ive assigned this a Special Commendation rating in the Poetry Directory in token of it......

Author:  [ m e m ] [ February 17th, 2008, 7:45 pm ]
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Omgosh, really? That's funny... I mean, that you started a polling thread... I'm looking at it!

Author:  Larael [ February 23rd, 2008, 1:01 am ]
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How beautiful and touching. I'm really glad I took the time to read this, especially during the hard time I'm going through right now with the death of a friend on my mind.

Author:  [ m e m ] [ February 25th, 2008, 2:51 pm ]
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Aww, Larael... I'm sorry to hear your friend died... My grandma is sick with cancer right now, and if she dosen't get better she could have up to afew days to live... :'(

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