*claps* very nice
It's got a strangely pleaseing flow and though it didn't always ryme it still kept my attention very well. It was easy to read.
*thumbs up*
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ April 21st, 2008, 10:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | A Prayer |
"Our father, Who art in heaven..." Forgive me for A million sins. Forgive me for innumerable doubts! Please don't leave Me to suffer the Suffering of men. Deliver me from a World that's lost its soul, Deliver me from a World that can't Realise... They say you Aren't there, My abba, My father, But they don't understand. I pray for Their salvation, I pray that They can see Why we need you. I hope for them The comfort, The light and The hope Of God and the Savior, Who has forgiven all. Deliver them From a material world And its material sins, And the self-love of Man. Show them why We are human, Why we laugh and We cry, Why we wonder at The stars, Why we stare at The sky. Because there's something more, There's my Lord who is everything, And who can be seen in the Glory of our nature which We destroy as our souls, With a blackening hand And a calloused heart. By the Grace of God, The Holy Spirit, and Jesus Christ, Forgive us all. Amen. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 23rd, 2008, 3:15 pm ] |
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*claps* very nice
It's got a strangely pleaseing flow and though it didn't always ryme it still kept my attention very well. It was easy to read. *thumbs up*
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