Thanks for the comment.
Glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ May 27th, 2008, 10:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Tell Me, (Rated PG 13) |
(No offense but don't ask where this came from... because to be blunt... you won't get an answer) Are you a demon of my own, Your bloody claws on my throat? Have I sat while you have grown, Playing ever, deaths cold note? Your a witch, a wizard, A black blight on life. Your a serpent, your a lizard, Your deaths sharpened knife. Rip your skin, break your bone, Stab my heart, cut my throat. I'll weigh you down, with a stone, While I'm on top, in my boat. Drown now, my precious curse. Drown your vile filth in day. You killed me... or even worse, Now it's time that I repay. |
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| Author: | Ashwise [ June 6th, 2008, 9:11 am ] |
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eerily good. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ June 6th, 2008, 10:22 am ] |
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Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Larael [ June 21st, 2008, 11:13 pm ] |
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Slightly disturbing... but in a good way. 'Twas very well written. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ June 27th, 2008, 5:19 pm ] |
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Thanks for the comments Larael and Aerlinn.
Glad you liked them ( mostly) 
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| Author: | Larael [ June 27th, 2008, 10:08 pm ] |
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Oh, no, don't get me wrong. I like it and thought it well written. It was just a bit more morbid than I thought it'd be.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ June 30th, 2008, 10:48 am ] |
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It's fine, I agree with you actually.
It is quite dark... but my stuff tends to turn out that way when I am in certain moods. *shrugs* |
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| Author: | Arya Undomiel [ June 30th, 2008, 8:55 pm ] |
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I agree with what others have said...it's a bit dark and mysterious, but it's still quite good poetry. Good work! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ July 1st, 2008, 11:11 am ] |
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Thanks Appreciate the comments as always
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 4th, 2008, 11:03 pm ] |
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I absolutely love this.
i mean yeah, it's got that morbid darkish feeling to it, but we all have the side to us, and it's nice to read something that can expres it. Beautifully written. As always, you rock at life, my dear. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ July 8th, 2008, 11:37 am ] |
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lol thanks pip. Glad you liked it, as always and thanks for the comment.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 8th, 2008, 4:32 pm ] |
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my pleasure.
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| Author: | Eruraina [ July 8th, 2008, 6:11 pm ] |
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It's morbid... and kind of scary... yet fasinating at the same time... I had to read it a second time, don't know why. It's well written! I get the notion of a ghost trying to kill his/her killer and succeding... lol. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ July 9th, 2008, 2:11 pm ] |
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lol yeah, I can see how you would come up with that. Thanks for the comment as always.
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