wow... I don't remember all your work but I think i can say this may be your best I've read yet! I loved it.
It's very dark, yet so so true... and the choice of words was amazing. It flowed nicely and everything.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 20th, 2008, 9:19 pm ] |
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I reach for words unspoken, Haunted by the truth. Dreams long sought fall, broken, Deceived by falsified youth. Well our demon's patience lies on the waiting list. The search of the sixth sense Ends in slit wrists. The chaos to our order, The butter to our bread. The broken tape recorder Has simply been misled. We paint on our perfect face, Buy all the latest trends. Mistakes are just erased, There's no such thing as friends. Survival is a deadly game; It's every man for himself. The winner is the first to blame And wrongly accuse someone else. Shaking bodies, afraid to speak, Corrupted by bottled rage. A twisted form of hide and seek, Desperation to leave the cage. Are we lost to our assumptions? Has the finale come at last? Should we give in to our sins? Do we surrender to our past? Is our strength in one another? Can we forget the mistakes we've made? Would you betray your own brother? Will all those memories fade? All the questions left unanswered, All the words we'd like to say. All the promises we whispered, All those wasted beautiful days. Don't leave it to the dust. Find the voice inside the wind. Say and do what you must. Endure until the end. Live and never look back. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ August 21st, 2008, 10:30 am ] |
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wow... I don't remember all your work but I think i can say this may be your best I've read yet! I loved it. It's very dark, yet so so true... and the choice of words was amazing. It flowed nicely and everything.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 21st, 2008, 5:00 pm ] |
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oh wow. thanks jax. I appreciate it.
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 12th, 2008, 8:22 pm ] |
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Wow I think Jax may be right... I think this one might be your best. It makes you think. Very well done. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 13th, 2008, 1:47 pm ] |
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aw, thanks arwen. I appreciate it. |
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| Author: | Legolas15 [ September 13th, 2008, 2:52 pm ] |
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Wow...I'm speechless! That was amazing! *gives two thumbs-up* 
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 13th, 2008, 11:14 pm ] |
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aw, you're sweet. thank you |
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| Author: | Legolas15 [ September 13th, 2008, 11:16 pm ] |
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Aww...Thanks, I need encouragement. You're welcome! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 21st, 2008, 9:10 pm ] |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 21st, 2008, 9:11 pm ] |
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| Author: | Inwe Calaelen [ September 29th, 2008, 6:44 pm ] |
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whoa, that was AAAMAZING! no joke that was bloody brilliant! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 29th, 2008, 10:36 pm ] |
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aw, thank you *blush* I appreciate it. |
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