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Author:  ~Goldleaf~ [ May 6th, 2009, 5:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Serena Reine ~ pale stars
Okay, so here's a poem I wrote about a character called Serena Reine, invented by SilverRose and me :) I won't reveal the entire storyline we're plotting, but let's just say she loses her heart to one of the LOTR guys ^_^ Heehee.
goldyxxx

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Too cold inside to even reply to your explanation
It's just another string of words, no need for conversation
I know you won't stay here by my side
A part me knows, and has died....

You were the stars,
You were the bright light shining above
You were my life
You were everything I so desired to have
But I must watch you build your life away from me
And I am down below here, you won't even notice me...

I will retreat behind myself
I won't speak to you, you won't know I was there
Did your heart ever feel for me?
I loved you so much, could you not see?

If only these dreams would turn into a living legacy
The fragile hopes I held so dearly.

Pale stars shining above me
The bright light has faded, you're my beautiful memory
I can't escape it, you're the one that I loved
You were it all, you were the stars above.
Author:  SilverRose [ May 7th, 2009, 10:36 am ]
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SERAGORNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH, GOLDIE!!!!! :swoon: :swoon: You art the official poem writer of Serena. :notworthy: This was so heartbreaking, so beautiful. I showed this to one of my RL friends, and she said it would make an amazing song...and I think she fell in love with it. ;) I'll shalt bug you to write more of these, and now I want to write my own. We should keep a collection of Serena poems here!
Author:  Nerissa [ May 7th, 2009, 10:44 am ]
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Hehehe, I guess I was right about which couple I thought it was. :P That's a very beautiful poem, Goldy! I agree that it would make a good song. ;) It's just got that nice rhythm to it. *claps wildly*
Author:  ~Goldleaf~ [ May 7th, 2009, 3:32 pm ]
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Thanks guys! :-D

Silvery, I'm glad you approve ;) Thankeee! Glad your friend liked it too - ages ago I used to write tons of songs, with choruses and stuff, but lately I mostly write more poem style stuff - I often try to get a tune in my head though, like you do with songs :)

And Neri, thanks much for the wild clappinggg! Teehee :lol:
Author:  SilverRose [ May 7th, 2009, 6:24 pm ]
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I do indeed approve! I used to write a lot of A/E type poetry that was actually very similar to yours in style, although not anywhere near as good. :-P So....please write more!!! I'll try to come up with something soon and send it to you to critique. :) I shall end this with....SERAGORNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!! You have no idea how fun it is for me to write that. heehee
Author:  ~Goldleaf~ [ May 8th, 2009, 4:12 pm ]
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Yay! Poetry rocks! :-D I shall look forward to seeing any poems you write; I'm sure they'll be great! :)

Hehehe, SERAGORNNNNNN! By the way, I feel very honoured to see lines from my poem in your sig :-D
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