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Author: | Zirakzigil [ July 11th, 2011, 2:06 am ] |
Post subject: | The Forgotten(prose about the fading of the Númenórean race) |
The Forgotten (K+) Those who once rode forth in pride, Their hair about their shoulders flew; Where now their crimson flow they gave for glory's sake? Who now keeps watch upon the deserted walls of men? Not they. The shattered lands find them not. For the earth hath laid them under mounds of jade Where they sleep with forefathers fallen long before their time. Upon the breast of their mother they slumber, Unknown to their descendants. The grandeur of their hallowed halls and soaring towers Now crumble in ancient tales untold to lesser men. Under the weeping skies sword, shield , and armor Fade, decay, and become dust. Thus that which was now dissipates. Those once wreathed in honor lie forgotten Beneath the cares of an older world. -Laesneniel (Faramir's Scribe and true love) |
Author: | Cara [ July 11th, 2011, 6:46 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: The Forgotten(prose about the fading of the Númenórean r |
Very strong imagery and good use of words. You are slowly becoming my favourite poet ![]() |
Author: | Zirakzigil [ July 11th, 2011, 10:38 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: The Forgotten(prose about the fading of the Númenórean r |
Morgana wrote: Very strong imagery and good use of words. You are slowly becoming my favourite poet ![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much, Morgana! |
Author: | Hanasian [ July 16th, 2011, 8:49 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: The Forgotten(prose about the fading of the Númenórean r |
Beautiful imagery! |
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