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Ring (A poem about the One Rings thoughts)
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Author:  Zirakzigil [ July 12th, 2011, 12:36 am ]
Post subject:  Ring (A poem about the One Rings thoughts)
Sooooooo, yeah, I just wrote this today and I would like to dedicate it to Morgana. Thank you for your kind words, gorgeous banner, and high praise! :hug:

Ring (K+)

I take a breath
My first to breathe
I produce death
My destiny

My master sings
I feel the joy
Of many things
That I destroy

I feel the power
Flood through my band
This is my hour
When on this hand.

The bond is cut
My reign is pruned
I wait and watch but
hear no tune.

I must await
The master's call
I feel my fate
I feel a draw.

If I can fin'lly
Be returned
To my own kind
I shall not burn

With un-told lust
And evil schemes
Here in the dust
Amid the leaves.

An echoed sound
I take a breath
I have been found
I exhale...death.

-Laesneniel (Faramir's Scribe and true love)
Author:  Cara [ July 12th, 2011, 1:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ring (A poem about the One Rings thoughts)
Woohoo, thank you very much, Laesneniel :) Its beautiful poem. You always find a good words to describe the feeling and the exact thing. I always had troubles with that, so I don't produce as much poetry as I would like.

I feel the evil of the Ring as well as urgent call of Lord of Darkness :yes:
Author:  Zirakzigil [ July 12th, 2011, 9:26 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ring (A poem about the One Rings thoughts)
You are most welcome, Morgana! I have trouble finding the right words at times, sometimes I have to look at the poem I'm working on at a different angle. Thank you for your praise! :hug:
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