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| Author: | Bellatrix [ April 12th, 2013, 3:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
All rhymey and whatnot. Posted because Alatáriël Telemnar asked for it. * * * Mirror, mirror on the wall. Who is fairest of them all? Words echoing through hallowed halls, tearing the bricks apart as night outside falls. The answer her bitter beauty needs, is not deserved due to her wretched deeds. The tone she has is sharp and cruel, she cares for no one and he who care for her; a fool. Skin so clear and hair so fair, is all a lie and the truth beneath is hollow as air. A queen she acts and as a queen she rules, those who do not follow are nothing but ghouls. The mirror speaks and tells her a tale, of a girl with dark hair, red lips, and skin so pale. “She holds more beauty than thee, and to your downfall this fair maiden holds the key.” Terrified and angry with bitter rage, the queen roars and her emotions are released from their cage. “Who is this monster who dares outshine me?” she hollers so darkly as her soft voice can be. “Snow White,” the mirror whispers so slow, “Guided by dwarves and a huntsman and a prince with a bow.” Gently and softly, as if he was never even there, the mirror image fades, leaving the queen alone and filled with fear. “Snow White must die, her heart in my hand!” she cries through the castle and all through the land. “Bring me her now,” she commands her men, “I’ll make sure she disappears and is never seen again!” Her lips trembling with furious wrath. Her eyes gleaming with dangerous thoughts. Her fingers gripping a sword of steel. Outside roars the rain, and inside blood shall be shed. Snow White so pure, is soon to be dead. |
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| Author: | Tinker Bell [ April 12th, 2013, 11:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
I like it!
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| Author: | Bellatrix [ April 13th, 2013, 6:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
Yay, thanks. I suck at poetry, I can't write it to save my life, but this was a fun project haha. |
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| Author: | Tinker Bell [ April 13th, 2013, 10:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
You certainly write better poems than I do! |
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| Author: | Bellatrix [ April 13th, 2013, 10:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
This is seriously the only poem of mine that makes any sort of sense. And that's just because it's written in rhyme. xD |
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| Author: | Alatáriël Telemnar [ April 14th, 2013, 12:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
It not just like; it's love. I am in love with this poem. God bless you Bella, may the ink of yours never run out. |
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| Author: | Bellatrix [ April 14th, 2013, 12:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
Thank you, let's hope it doesn't! |
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| Author: | Alatáriël Telemnar [ April 14th, 2013, 2:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
You shall see the greatness of your words lives within others too; just wait and you shall see.
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| Author: | Bellatrix [ April 14th, 2013, 2:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
Welllllllll on that note, I do have other stories posted here too. (And I have probably 200 unposted stories in all genres, of all lengths and finished/unfinished too.  )
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| Author: | Alatáriël Telemnar [ April 14th, 2013, 3:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mirror Mirror, Snow White Poem (Rated T) |
I am on reading them sweet Bella .
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