Thanks.
Glad you likes it!
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 10th, 2015, 2:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | "War From Unknown Lands" |
"War From Unknown Lands" Sounding, pounding, rustling leaves, Quaking, breaking, the earth bereaves. Up in the mountains the gate rises high, The portal opens, the end draws nigh. Clapping, snapping, thunderous flash, Vamping, ramping, on to bash. A fight is on hand from distant land, The armies arrive and at the gate stand! Moaning, Groaning, sighs of sorrow, Stench, drenched, in the pains of tomorrow. From where they came we still don't know, So we've no idea to where we go. Sounding, pounding, rustling leaves, Quaking, breaking, the earth bereaves. Up in the mountains the gate rises high, The portal opens, the end draws nigh. Cries, sighs, stanch determination, Strong, with song, we march to obliteration. They attacked us first from unknown land, We simply return in hand. Shaking, quaking, breaking.... Not is left but smoke and ash... Two worlds broken from a choice so rash. |
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| Author: | Captain Boromir [ November 10th, 2015, 2:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
I really liked this! Very well done. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 10th, 2015, 5:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
Thanks. Glad you likes it!
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| Author: | ~Aranel~ [ November 10th, 2015, 10:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
Ooooh...this is really good! The imagery was excellent, and I would love to read more. Well done. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 11th, 2015, 12:38 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
Thanks!  I am sure I will post more when I get a chance. But I'll be expecting to see some more of yours too!  I always enjoy a good read and reading my own stuff just doesn't cut it. Lol |
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| Author: | ~Aranel~ [ November 11th, 2015, 12:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
You're most welcome. I'm thinking of posting one of my other poems in a little bit actually. You mind-reader, you 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 11th, 2015, 1:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "War From Unknown Lands" |
Sh.... No one can know!   Lol Well, I will have to check it out then! |
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