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Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ December 31st, 2005, 12:37 pm ]
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i usually put this stuff in the nazgu club, but now im going to use the proper forum, ill post poetry here every few days, heres one to start

On an endless night
All hope fades away

On an endless night
All light fails

But on an endless night
Light breaks through

But on an endless night
Hope rides home
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 1st, 2006, 11:32 pm ]
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heres another piece related to Narnia

The green fields blossom
in and endless Spring

the great trees thrive
the flowers bloom

but on a day
sad to all

White winter came
and frost crept in
Author:  Guest [ January 2nd, 2006, 9:33 pm ]
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good the only problem is that I don't really see it. I feel a little like it's mounful. Is that what you were going for. 'Cause in the book they made Narnia sound beautiful.
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 2nd, 2006, 10:10 pm ]
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im going for mournful, im trying to get across the sadness of the people of Narnia , not what Narnia looks like
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 11th, 2006, 11:25 pm ]
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heres a new little thing that i think a person in Narnia would thin kup

Why must flowers
In winter die?

Why must trees
in great fost fade?

Why must grass,
Once so green
turn to brown

why must winter
cruelest of colds
come each year
a blight upon the days

Why must christmas
greatest of days
Come to not
on darkest of day
Author:  Haldir Ithillen [ January 12th, 2006, 2:49 pm ]
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wow....
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 12th, 2006, 9:25 pm ]
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thanks, i can't really compare to some other people though :confused:
Author:  Haldir Ithillen [ January 13th, 2006, 11:33 am ]
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*smiles*
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 14th, 2006, 12:48 am ]
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*looks at smile and speculates what it means*
Author:  Haldir Ithillen [ January 15th, 2006, 1:12 pm ]
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It's a good smile...
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 15th, 2006, 1:26 pm ]
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just making sure :-p
Author:  Haldir Ithillen [ January 15th, 2006, 1:37 pm ]
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Don't worry, I'm not the one to make a fake smile...
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 24th, 2006, 7:02 pm ]
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heres another poem produced by listening to a song....

Oh old memorys
years ever fleeting

Oh why do you
have to turn to ash

Oh why must the world
come to not

Oh I how i wish
to relive past summers

Oh why must it be
mans dark fate
to forever long
for days gone past
Author:  Jax Nova [ January 24th, 2006, 7:28 pm ]
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Not bad.
Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 24th, 2006, 7:31 pm ]
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*sigh* all these poems are mournful, I need to listen to some positive songs...(and thanks)
Author:  Haldir Ithillen [ January 25th, 2006, 11:40 am ]
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:hug: It's okay, you should see the newer-ish poem I wrote...
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