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Author:  brego145 [ December 31st, 2005, 1:11 pm ]
Post subject:  my poem

OK here is one I just made up.

One ring...it can change
the way people
think about
a
small little thing
This ring
can change
the way
the world runs

Author:  Amara [ January 4th, 2006, 1:34 am ]
Post subject: 

Short, but to the point. Good job!!! ^_^

Author:  Guest [ January 9th, 2006, 9:21 pm ]
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not bad...I think if you added more it would be REALLY good. It's good ,but could be better

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