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Author: | brego145 [ December 31st, 2005, 1:11 pm ] |
Post subject: | my poem |
OK here is one I just made up. One ring...it can change the way people think about a small little thing This ring can change the way the world runs |
Author: | Amara [ January 4th, 2006, 1:34 am ] |
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Short, but to the point. Good job!!! ^_^ |
Author: | Guest [ January 9th, 2006, 9:21 pm ] |
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not bad...I think if you added more it would be REALLY good. It's good ,but could be better |
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