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Author: | Jax Nova [ January 10th, 2006, 7:27 pm ] |
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Welcomed Darkness The lights bright glare grows ever strong, My soul is silent, no joy, no song. I look above to see the sun, My legs woun't move, I try to run. It seems the light, it's always on me, Yet I'm blind, I don't see. There is no one there, waitng for me, Though they are there, all around me. I long for night that will not come, Heart beats, the sound of a drum. Though there in the light it brings me sadness, I long for night, welcome darkness. |
Author: | SI~Dhodrimme [ January 10th, 2006, 7:33 pm ] |
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O.O Ooooh, Neato! Interesting subject.... |
Author: | Jax Nova [ January 10th, 2006, 7:55 pm ] |
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I woun't give the backstory but glad you liked it. |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 9th, 2006, 6:20 pm ] |
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It's really...well, deep. I like things that are deep. & it's sad. but those are the kind of things I like. (not really sure why, but i like the sad things. ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 9th, 2006, 6:54 pm ] |
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lol. Thanks. I tend to write sad things when I am sad. (suprising huh?) Anyways. But I like alot of them that have emoption in them so... *shrugs* |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 9th, 2006, 7:09 pm ] |
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there not is good if u can't feel the emotion in them. same things w/ songs. yes, i have to relate absolutely everything 2 music. lol. have u ever heard the song Butterfly Kisses? kinda random, but when u talk about emotion, i think of that songs. it's one of my fav. songs, but it makes me cry. same with Live Like You Were Dying. |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 9th, 2006, 7:13 pm ] |
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Yep herd butterfly kisses. (by Bob carliel (sp?) ) unless its a different song. Iam posative I have herd Live like you were dying somewhere... but I can not think of what it's like or anything.... |
Author: | FRODOFAN [ March 9th, 2006, 11:57 pm ] |
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This is nice. Nice description. Do you have an account at allpoetry.com? If you do, let me know. I'd love to add you to my favorites list. |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 10th, 2006, 3:24 pm ] |
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Thanks. I have never herd of them... might have to check it out. *looks it up* Looks pretty nice. ![]() |
Author: | Fíriel_18190 [ March 10th, 2006, 5:26 pm ] |
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that poem is really nice... it's kinda sad but I like such stuff ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 11th, 2006, 2:20 pm ] |
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Yeah it is a bit dreary.... but I tend to write some of them off and on. *shrugs* Glad you like it though:) |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 12th, 2006, 10:13 pm ] |
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Jax Nova wrote: Yep herd butterfly kisses. (by Bob carliel (sp?) ) unless its a different song.
Iam posative I have herd Live like you were dying somewhere... but I can not think of what it's like or anything.... Yep, that's the 1. it's so pretty. Live like you were dying is an awesome song. the chorus is: I went sky diving I went Rocky Mountain climbing I went 2.7 seconds on a bull named Fumanchu and I loved deeper and I spoke sweeter and I gave forgiveness I’d been denying and he said someday I hope you get the chance to live like you were dying. Tim McGraw sings it. i luv it. but both of them make me cry. Those & Healing Rain, by Michael (sp?) W. Smith (I luv Michael W. Smith.) Ever heard of it? (I know, kind of off subject for this thread....lol sorry.) |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 13th, 2006, 7:25 pm ] |
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Yeah it's a good song. Lol. I KNEW I had herd that song "Live Like You Were Dying" somewhere. I saw it on the Grand Ol' (sp?) Oprey when we watched it on tv once. Yeah like it also. ![]() Healing rain, yep herd it allso! Michael W Smith is pretty good, I have a couple of his CDs. (it's ok if it's off subject... one reason we could use that other thread..) |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 14th, 2006, 7:01 pm ] |
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ya, I like Michael W. Smith a lot. He's good. I also really like Casting Crowns? ever heard of them? my fav. songs r Voice of Truth & If We Are the Body. wut kind of music do u like & who do u listen 2? We really should make another thread. we can call it the "jax, pip, & arwen thread." lol ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 15th, 2006, 3:34 pm ] |
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Yes we should... ( i'll let you dot hat lol just be sure and tell us when/if ya do:) ) I like Michael W Smith and Casting Crowns but my favorite is more of the up beat high energy stuff. I really like the Elms, Krystle Meyers, Supper Chic[k]... and stuff like that. But I also listen to celtic music, LOTR music, western, country, musicals, oriental stuff and things like that soo I have a wide range of music . ( I have like 35 hours of music on my laptop it's Awasome!!) |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 15th, 2006, 9:41 pm ] |
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lol. that's a lot of music. ![]() ![]() ya, i'll make a thread for us if i remember after i check all of my posts. lol ![]() |
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