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Post subject: A Thorn Posted: January 28th, 2006, 12:31 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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A thorn pierced my side and brought me down,
My blood running out onto the ground.
My trouble slashed my soul and told me lies,
I'm not worthy of this prize.
The throns pierced his brow and crowned him king,
The rightfull Lord of everything.
A spear pierced his side and left the mark,
His blood poured out on the ark.
What more can I as mortal man,
Expect to hold in my hand?
Yet only to follow him in all His ways,
And be with Him till the end of days.
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Post subject: Posted: January 28th, 2006, 12:49 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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Love it (I'm a fellow Christian)
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Post subject: Posted: January 28th, 2006, 5:25 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thnx. Just so you know the significants of "my" blood being poured out ont he ground is because in the Old testament that was a sign of an inadequet sacrifice... But the blood of Jesus when he died actualy went through an earthquack crack and fell ont he ark of the covonent (the most holly alter) that had been placed there 500 years earlyer by revelation....wasn't sure if you knew that so I thought I woudl clear that up for anyone who might be wondering
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Post subject: Posted: January 31st, 2006, 12:14 pm |
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Joined: 20 January 2006 Posts: 1429 Location: Hertfordshire, England
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Wow. This is fantastic as well, very strongly written, and amazing images.
Ah, you're a good poet!
_________________ "Anyone who lives within their means suffers from a lack of imagination" - Oscar Wilde
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Post subject: Posted: February 1st, 2006, 3:12 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol thanks. Glad you liked it!
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