The Dark Brother


Cursed by Fate
Discarded by the Gods
Entrapped by his own design
Bound to his words


Clad in black
Passing like a shadow
He changes things as he passes
And he restores things to their original


Shrouded in mystery
Cloaked in secrets
Entralled to omission
Delivered from unknown


He leaves no trace of his passing
He vanishes with no sign
Yet all know when he goes
Somehow they know where he's been


Weary and alone
Doomed to this fate
Unable to unbind the fortold
Enslaved to his own vow


Power wanted
Responisblity given
Fear unallowed
Death uncertain

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Son of FrostLord and Natalie Portman Brother of FaZiovsky

Clueless member of the Welcoming Team

Not bad. Keep it up!

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