like it, flows well, like all of your stuff
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 6th, 2006, 3:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | ~~The age of man~~ |
THE AGE OF MAN By sword we hold our land, Pressing on the evil hand. Though death's cold grasp is ever near, We cast aside our every fear. We fight for life and fight for death, Knowing this could be our final breath. But the age of man is comming fast, The question now, will it last? Our one hope travels through black lands, Ever close to the enmies hands. His eye watching day and night, Only to be destracted by our fight. Long last we prevail, But at what cost and what trivale? All is safe from enemie hands, We have held Gondor's lands! The age of man is now at hand, Pouring over this blood stained land. But the age of man will not die, For it's held by the king on high! Just something I wrote about LOTR. Just for the fun of it. |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 6th, 2006, 7:30 pm ] |
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like it, flows well, like all of your stuff
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 7th, 2006, 1:59 pm ] |
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Thanks. |
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| Author: | Anduril Vanlhach [ February 11th, 2006, 5:48 pm ] |
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yeyeyeyeyeyp definietly regrt that i don't know you and so can't publish |
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| Author: | Tanthoronial [ February 14th, 2006, 7:41 pm ] |
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Its good, does flow well and the rhyming doesn't sound forced which is good.. Title reminds me of Shakespears Five Ages of Man poem.. 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 15th, 2006, 5:29 pm ] |
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Thanks both! Glad you liked it. I have honestly neve read much shakespear. Any advice to help me in my poetry writing from ANYONE is welcomed and appriciated. |
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| Author: | Ms.Gamgee [ February 15th, 2006, 10:18 pm ] |
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No, I cant give you any advice because I liked it...A LOT! And generally I dont like other people's poems because many times the ryhming sounds stressed etc. but I really like this! Kudos! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 16th, 2006, 8:18 pm ] |
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Thanks. Really appriciate it! |
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| Author: | Ashwise [ February 20th, 2006, 12:33 am ] |
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Wow, that is great! It was a joy to read! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 20th, 2006, 11:56 am ] |
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The only advice I can give you is this......keep writing!!! 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 20th, 2006, 4:16 pm ] |
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lol. That seems to be popular advice. Thanks for it anyway! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 20th, 2006, 4:18 pm ] |
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popular & good advice!! hehe
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 20th, 2006, 4:35 pm ] |
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Yeah... I agree. I have said that to manny people myself. (partly because that's about all I can say since I realy am not any kind of authority on the subject) |
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ March 3rd, 2006, 8:59 pm ] |
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My advice- GO GET PUBLISHED!! You really need to- your work is fantastic!!!! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 4th, 2006, 2:42 pm ] |
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lol. Thanks. I would like to. I am writing a book of poetry but he main thing is (naturaly finishing it first) and the cost. It is going to cost around 1500 so I will have to come up with that fro somewhere... I had an idea about having somone else write in teh book as well so we split the book. That way it would split the cost as well but there is no one else I know that would be interested so... |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 4th, 2006, 11:29 pm ] |
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*agrees w/ Arwen Evenstar* wow. that's a lot of $ more than i'll prob. ever have. lol
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