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| Author: | Darrell [ February 15th, 2006, 8:09 am ] |
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This is poem I wrote several years ago. i recently discovered it in a pile of papers. It is very random, but I hope you like it. As the sun sets in the West like a smooth corruption of fantasy breaking on the shores of a mans boot as he passes through the corner of life in a coarse, soft plague, of apple reisin And the mountains lie wet in coral reef stricken by an attack of, theoretical damage pounding upon the door like the wreckage of the Pacific dripping down a hole in the bathroom floor. In the poem it rolls, it rolls, it rolls. And alas, the man is left standing alone talking with the West wind, about, nothing imparticular, and the ways of men and elves, and the movements in the east of the great armies of nothing parading around breaking everything with emptiness. And all the while you can't take what you like from an all borne grace sitting high in the trees, waiting, waiting. In the poem it rolls, it rolls, it rolls, it stops. Dead on the spot. There it is. The seed of my madness. And it even contains a reference to LotR, from before I was obsessed with it. Hope you found it mildly entertaining. |
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| Author: | Seral [ February 15th, 2006, 10:01 am ] |
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*grins* I love random poetry^^ *takes poem and puts it in sack**runs away* |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 15th, 2006, 5:27 pm ] |
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It was very interesting. I usualy don't like poems that don't rym alot. (not sure why that's just me) But I realy did like that. It was thought provoking. |
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| Author: | Shadowstorm [ February 16th, 2006, 4:31 pm ] |
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It's incredibly beautiful, you know. Very winding, and a stunning weave of imagery. An utter pleasure to read, especially out loud. (I reccommend it.) Wonderfully expressive, even if random...and...very much yourself. -smiles- |
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| Author: | Darrell [ February 16th, 2006, 5:03 pm ] |
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Thank you. I have decided that the poem may be the best way to describe my thought process. Glad you think its good shadow. I did partially write it to be read aloud, it sounds better that way^^ |
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| Author: | Shadowstorm [ February 16th, 2006, 5:14 pm ] |
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You're welcome, of course. -smiles- I think that it's not only good, but beautiful...and I must urge you to write more! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 16th, 2006, 8:23 pm ] |
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Agreed. As long as you injoy writing I owuld as wel urge you to write more! |
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| Author: | Darrell [ February 17th, 2006, 10:38 am ] |
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Thanks for the encouragement but I think that this was a one off. Still, I may try writing something a little different. (Has noticed and corrected a minor typo] |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 17th, 2006, 4:11 pm ] |
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Well, I wouldn't want to make anyone feel like they sould do something they don't wana do... after all it's not my chooice. but all the same I think your pretty good at it. 
(ok I have asked several people and never got an answer. Since I don't get out much I have no idea... what is a typo?) |
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| Author: | Darrell [ February 17th, 2006, 4:18 pm ] |
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Thanks Jax. When the mood takes me I'll write another one. (A typo is where you make a mistake (normally spelling) when you type something wrong. You know what it should be, you just typed the wrong thing. You go back and correct it. or if you can't correct it, you apologise for it. I hope I explained it )
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 17th, 2006, 7:17 pm ] |
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(ok thanks. Sorry for the trouble. so it would be like typing see instead of sea?) |
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| Author: | Darrell [ February 18th, 2006, 4:36 am ] |
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(yeah, or typing ehllo or helli insteand of Hello) |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 18th, 2006, 3:49 pm ] |
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ok thanks! Sorry for all the questions and thanks for the explination! |
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| Author: | Darrell [ February 19th, 2006, 3:48 am ] |
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No problem Jax. Any time
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