Thanks. Glad you liked it!
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 21st, 2006, 9:08 pm ] |
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"3 Souls" Deep inside I feel it's right but none will listen now, Somone pleas explain to me and somone tell me how! How can I get through to those who will not hear my word, How can the say they know it when they never even herd? How do I set it right and still keep a friend, How can I watch them tary ever nbear the end? What is it I can say as a mortal soul, That will reach the depths of some that seem so cold? Pleas tell me anyone that wich I must do, I need somone there, there to see me through. Somone I can trust and lead through His plan, Somone I can hold to ther's and His hand. Somone who will always tell just what they are feeling, Somone I can in-turn help through the things fate is dealing. Somone that is ment to be a ever closer friend, Somone who will be there with me and God at the end. One God, Two hearts, One life, Three souls. Tell me now my one true friend we'll never be apart! |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 21st, 2006, 10:39 pm ] |
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wonderful! flows well. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 22nd, 2006, 11:17 am ] |
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Thanks. Glad you liked it!
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| Author: | Lúthien Star-Lover [ February 24th, 2006, 4:44 pm ] |
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wow, I really like it, Jax Nova! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 24th, 2006, 5:25 pm ] |
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thanks! |
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ March 3rd, 2006, 8:50 pm ] |
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Great job as always!!
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 4th, 2006, 2:36 pm ] |
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lol. Thanks!
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 4th, 2006, 11:36 pm ] |
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I luved it! ur so good @ poetry!! Definately a God-given-gift!!! 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 6th, 2006, 7:21 pm ] |
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lol thanks. Yes it is. And I am so glad He gave it to me! I just hope I can use it in His will.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 8th, 2006, 11:03 pm ] |
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seems like ur doing a pretty good job 2 me!
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ March 9th, 2006, 2:46 pm ] |
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A few typos, but very nice. I think this is a piece that many will be able to relate to. Nicely done. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 9th, 2006, 6:33 pm ] |
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Yes I know.. spelling is not one of my better areas. Put that with the times I mess up and it can get pretty bad sometimes. And since I am to lazy to put most of my stuff through a spell check.. well ya.. Thanks for the comment!
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 12th, 2006, 10:14 pm ] |
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LOL. *says sarcastically* I know it's so hard to click on the spell check button. lol
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 13th, 2006, 7:31 pm ] |
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lol. Yeah isn't it though? But I write all my stuff on the sight and don't copy/past from other documents..... I supose maybe I should... |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ March 14th, 2006, 6:57 pm ] |
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really? do u just write it on the spot? Like i know sum ppl will be sitting there, & boom! something pops into their mind & they have to write it down & end up making an entire song or poem out of it. r u like that? (cuz if u r, ur so0o0o lucky. lol)
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 15th, 2006, 3:37 pm ] |
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lol Yeah I just feel like writing something so I come in and start writing. |
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