Agent Jones wrote:
Just don't try to indent, forums won't let you, just spacing will work
Okay, thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind next time!
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| Author: | Kitoky [ February 27th, 2006, 10:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Diary of Juliet Capulet [By Kitoky] |
Tuesday, June 17 Dear Diary, I have just received grave news from my mother and father. Grave news to me yet cause for celebration for my parents. On Thursday, I will yet again wed but to the county Paris. But must I? I have openly refused. I must comply unless I am to be brave enough to go and live on my own. I pray that the heavens give me strength for now I fear that if I really try to leave my home – it shall be the death of me. And no more would I have hoped to ever see my beloved Romeo. Tell me, close friend, do the heavens curse my name? What more can I repent for what ever I have done for them to have such cruel spite? I declare you my only friend. You are the only person I can confide in. And what a great ability as that you cannot speak to anyone about my matters, my secrets. My nurse has betrayed me. She who had been my only confidant has now broken oaths with me by saying… ‘Marry Paris! Romeo is gone!’ What say you, dear friend? How can I possibly marry again when I am already made wife to Romeo? If I may marry Paris, God will frown upon my being for then I would have sinned. Yet if I were to refuse this marriage, my last resort could possibly be to take my life. Is it at the heaven’s fault then, when taking one’s life is also a sin? Am I born then to sin? Dear friend, can you not answer my inquiries? Very well, I must see off to the friar. Surely he has received news of this! But will he help me now? Will he too betray mine and Romeo’s trust so as he can hide his involvement in this secrecy? And if he truly has no plan for me to possibly be with Romeo then I see that I do not have a choice but to sin on God’s earth. Farewell dear friend. For this may or may not be my parting words if the friar’s news are, too, grave. Juliet Capulet ++++++++++++++++ Comments? Constructive criticism? |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 27th, 2006, 11:30 pm ] |
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like it, except needs to be more paragraph oriented, reading solid blocks of text like that hurts my eyes. |
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| Author: | Kitoky [ February 27th, 2006, 11:52 pm ] |
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Eep, sorry! I didn't realize it came out like that. I copy-pasted from my Word document. I shall fix it so that it'll be easier to read. Thanks! |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 27th, 2006, 11:52 pm ] |
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Just don't try to indent, forums won't let you, just spacing will work |
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| Author: | Kitoky [ February 27th, 2006, 11:55 pm ] |
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Agent Jones wrote: Just don't try to indent, forums won't let you, just spacing will work
Okay, thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind next time!
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