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Author:  Maralyn Imladiel [ March 13th, 2006, 8:21 am ]
Post subject:  An Ode to Elves

This is a really stupid poem I wrote when I was 11...it isn't very good but it's funny. ^^

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An Ode to Elves
Men are selfish,
and ents aren't smart.
Hobbits are puny,
and dwarves have icy hearts.
But behold,
the elves!
So fair in face!
So gentle in nature!
Oh, noble race!
They are clean,
they are smart,
and they are very pure in heart.
Their hair is silver,
their hearts are gold.
They look so young,
although they're old.
So if you need advice,
or hurt yourself,
then don't be hasty:
GO TO AN ELF!

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 13th, 2006, 7:07 pm ]
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lol. I like it! :) That's a good poem, and humorous. (somethin i can't do in poems) Nice job. :)

Author:  Maralyn Imladiel [ March 14th, 2006, 8:17 am ]
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lol, thank you. :-D

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 14th, 2006, 2:59 pm ]
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:) keep up the writing! You do good.

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