aww ... thats such a sweet poem! it made me cry a little
like a lot of poems do ... poems are such beautiful things...especially yours
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 29th, 2006, 7:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Oh, dark king, every weary....a poem |
*An alternate look at Hades, ruler of the Greek underworld The dark king rests, cold and weary his eyes dull from days long gone Hades longs for what he has ever lost The light of the sky the warmth of the sun He longs for the Earth domain of Zeus But he stays 'lone hidden under earth And evermore will Hades mourn stony eyes teary. |
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| Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 29th, 2006, 7:53 pm ] |
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aww ... thats such a sweet poem! it made me cry a little like a lot of poems do ... poems are such beautiful things...especially yours
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 29th, 2006, 7:59 pm ] |
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thank you, I find it easy to express that sense of loss I put into my poems. |
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| Author: | greenstorm [ March 29th, 2006, 8:23 pm ] |
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 wow! I really like this. I am a poet myself. You should expand on it. This poem has a lot of room and potential! 
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| Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 29th, 2006, 8:35 pm ] |
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poety, i find, is impossible for me to write  i just love reading other peoples' poems and enjoy them  you should write more and post them up
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 30th, 2006, 3:30 pm ] |
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| It was a good poem but personaly I like the ryming ones... but it was still a good peom! (that's just my personal opinion)
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