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Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 29th, 2006, 9:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Atlantis....another poem

Atlantis lies
under depths

glory past
long before

But under the sea
one can hear the song

The mournful melody
of greatness gone

Oh, Atlantis!
I long for you

Lost to ocean
dark and blue

Greatest of nations
under the azure skies

I reach for you
and find only ruin

But yet I still
mourn for you
Atlantis under the deep blue

Author:  Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 29th, 2006, 9:50 pm ]
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why are you such a good writer??? :blink: i am SO jealous!! that was a truly wonderful poem!!

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 29th, 2006, 9:50 pm ]
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It's not that I'm good, it's just I get into the right mood for it.

Author:  Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 29th, 2006, 9:51 pm ]
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well theyre still really good ;)

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 29th, 2006, 11:06 pm ]
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I suppose, though I only rhyme occasionally.

Author:  Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 29th, 2006, 11:10 pm ]
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ooo its prettier that way! :) i love your poems!!

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