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a poem by me.
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Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 1st, 2006, 10:22 pm ]
Post subject:  a poem by me.
this is a poem by me.

JUST AS HE SAID

Splinters lodged beneath his skin.
The weight of the cross incomprehensible to most men.
Crowds flocked to see him walk towards his death.
Some spat and hurled insults.
While others quietly wept.
Beaten to a bloody pulp.
His figure all misshapen.
God looked down from heaven and knew this had to happen.
When asked who they wanted crucified, the crowd went wild.
They shout “crucify him! The one who calls himself the son of God!”
And so they nailed him to the cross and lifted him upright.
Still they yell their insults to the one perfect in God’s sight.
“it is finished!” was his final cry.
And with one last breath his head hung to die.
One took his body and placed it in a tomb.
The thoughts of many did Jesus consume.
Three days later he rose from the dead.
The death of the savior ended just as he said

so what yawl think?
Author:  Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ April 2nd, 2006, 12:46 am ]
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breathtaking... :surprise:
Author:  Sidawethiel [ April 2nd, 2006, 1:52 am ]
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This belongs in the Poetry Section! *nudge nudge*
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 2nd, 2006, 5:39 pm ]
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thank you all! its great to use this to God's glory.
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 2nd, 2006, 11:30 pm ]
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hey yawl R&R please, and thats READ AND REVIEW not READ AND RUN!
Author:  Captain Jack [ April 2nd, 2006, 11:42 pm ]
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That's really good. You did a great job. ^_^
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 3rd, 2006, 12:20 am ]
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thank you now will you let me win the last one to post thingey. :yoda:
Author:  evenstar of mirkwood [ April 3rd, 2006, 12:27 am ]
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wow. That was a good poem. It described an event and what went on. Amazing job!
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 3rd, 2006, 12:30 am ]
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thank you let me win.
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 3rd, 2006, 11:41 am ]
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Great job! I kind of had a little trouble getting the flow but besides that it was great! :) REally like the theam, it's always nice to see people writing about God and Jesus! :)
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 3rd, 2006, 12:01 pm ]
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thank you! like i said i love useing this to God's glory.
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 4th, 2006, 2:30 pm ]
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Yeah I can completely understand that! :) And it's very nice to see you do so. Keep it up! :) You do a nice job. :)
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 4th, 2006, 2:46 pm ]
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i have another poem, but im not going to put it up to unless i get ten more replys.
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 4th, 2006, 3:11 pm ]
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How come? *thinks* *mumbles something about posting 10 more times* lol sorry.
Author:  Envied Alexander [ April 4th, 2006, 3:43 pm ]
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lol cuz' i want to feel like its wanted! :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 4th, 2006, 4:39 pm ]
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Well if at least 1 person likes it you got that much. :) I like it.
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