this is a poem by me.

JUST AS HE SAID

Splinters lodged beneath his skin.
The weight of the cross incomprehensible to most men.
Crowds flocked to see him walk towards his death.
Some spat and hurled insults.
While others quietly wept.
Beaten to a bloody pulp.
His figure all misshapen.
God looked down from heaven and knew this had to happen.
When asked who they wanted crucified, the crowd went wild.
They shout “crucify him! The one who calls himself the son of God!”
And so they nailed him to the cross and lifted him upright.
Still they yell their insults to the one perfect in God’s sight.
“it is finished!” was his final cry.
And with one last breath his head hung to die.
One took his body and placed it in a tomb.
The thoughts of many did Jesus consume.
Three days later he rose from the dead.
The death of the savior ended just as he said

so what yawl think?

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

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This belongs in the Poetry Section! *nudge nudge*

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thank you all! its great to use this to God's glory.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

hey yawl R&R please, and thats READ AND REVIEW not READ AND RUN!

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

That's really good. You did a great job. ^_^

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thank you now will you let me win the last one to post thingey.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

wow. That was a good poem. It described an event and what went on. Amazing job!

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thank you let me win.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

Great job! I kind of had a little trouble getting the flow but besides that it was great! REally like the theam, it's always nice to see people writing about God and Jesus!

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thank you! like i said i love useing this to God's glory.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

Yeah I can completely understand that! And it's very nice to see you do so. Keep it up! You do a nice job.

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i have another poem, but im not going to put it up to unless i get ten more replys.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

How come? *thinks* *mumbles something about posting 10 more times* lol sorry.

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lol cuz' i want to feel like its wanted!

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

Well if at least 1 person likes it you got that much. I like it.

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