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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 7th, 2006, 4:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Help Me Help Her See

I've been praying lately, & I God has put it on my heart to tell a few of my friends about my faith. But for some reason, this can be kind of difficult for me. So, I wrote this poem. :) Hope u guys like it!! :bye2:


Help me, Help her see
Lost and alone,
Scared and afraid.
She wants to know
Of the price that He paid.

I want to tell her,
want her to see.
But I can’t help but ask,
Does it have to be me?

What will I tell her?
What will I say?
Look, this is God.
Trust in him and pray?

What if she laughs,
Or thinks that I’m strange?
What if she thinks
That it’s too late to change?

Forgive me for doubting,
But Lord, I just don’t see
Why I have to be the one to tell her;
Why it has to be me.

But then I remember
What I’m trying to claim.
I’m trying to tell her
To trust in your name.

So I’m taking a leap of faith.
I know that you’re here with me.
God, please give me strength.
Help me, help her see.

Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 7th, 2006, 5:21 pm ]
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i started to cry when i read this, if its OK with you, i want to put this in my photo album!

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 7th, 2006, 6:58 pm ]
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OMG! Princess Kade of Narnia, wow, gosh. :blush: I don't know what to say. Thank you. Of course you can put it in your album! This poem comes straight from the heart with me. It's SO hard to talk to people about your faith sometimes. I'm glad you liked it so much.

Author:  Lady Elenriel [ June 7th, 2006, 8:03 pm ]
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Wow! That's just beautiful and it rings so true. It's so wonderfully expressed. I don't know what else I can say. Great job!!! :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 8th, 2006, 1:09 pm ]
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thanks :blush:

Author:  Jax Nova [ June 9th, 2006, 6:28 pm ]
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Ditto! Excelent work. :) And hope it all works out for you. :)

(Man I am away for a bit and you write several poems. lol But that's a GOOD thing. Just keep writing your doing great!)

Author:  Fíriel_18190 [ June 10th, 2006, 6:04 am ]
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What a beautiful poem.. good job I really love it :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 10th, 2006, 3:53 pm ]
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lol. sry, Jax!! :) you know, it's weird, b/c i've never been very good 2 poetry b4 b/c i think i tried 2 hard! lol 8) If it's a subject (like this 1) that i feel strongly about or can realte 2, it just.....happens. *shrugs*

Thanks, Fíriel_18190. I appreciate the comments. :bye2:

Author:  Luthien of Lorien [ June 10th, 2006, 9:12 pm ]
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That is so true and well written, pip&leggyluvr. I appreciated it a lot, you are an excellent poet :D

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 11th, 2006, 12:07 am ]
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thanks. it definately comes straight from the heart. :)

Author:  Luthien of Lorien [ June 11th, 2006, 5:06 pm ]
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Well, that is the best kind of poem!

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 11th, 2006, 10:40 pm ]
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lol. u know it!! :)

Author:  lady_E [ June 16th, 2006, 11:38 am ]
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Wow..that was really good...i love it....5 stars ;)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 16th, 2006, 8:27 pm ]
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aw, thanks. :) I really appreciate the input u guys. i'm glad u like it!! :-D

Author:  Calathiel [ June 17th, 2006, 8:16 am ]
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great poem! Really! :)
you know, I'm reading much poems to learn from others,
and you inspired me just now! Thanks!

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 17th, 2006, 2:17 pm ]
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aw, thanks. Well u can thank Jax for that, b/c he's the 1 that inspired me!! lol :-D

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