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Author: | Annabel Lee [ June 18th, 2006, 11:36 pm ] |
Post subject: | Nonflying |
Hoping to fly Throughout the sky Holding me back An imageless force Its source I am sad to say Is what I am trying to escape. Though I try I am to admit That all birds cannot fly. |
Author: | Kit-Kat [ July 1st, 2006, 4:49 pm ] |
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It's an awesome poem Leaha, it reminds me of penguins!!!! It's really cool rhyming dude |
Author: | FRODOFAN [ July 3rd, 2006, 6:48 pm ] |
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A very interesting rhyme scheme. Pleasure to read. Keep writing. |
Author: | FĂriel_18190 [ July 4th, 2006, 4:24 pm ] |
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yeah, a nice poem indeed, I really like it |
Author: | Annabel Lee [ July 6th, 2006, 3:42 am ] |
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Thank You this is one of my personal favorites.... I need to put all my poems on one thread.... ![]() |
Author: | Ashwise [ July 8th, 2006, 5:38 pm ] |
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I like it! |
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