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Author:  Annabel Lee [ June 18th, 2006, 11:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Nonflying

Hoping to fly
Throughout the sky
Holding me back
An imageless force

Its source
I am sad to say
Is what I am trying to escape.

Though I try
I am to admit
That all birds cannot fly.

Author:  Kit-Kat [ July 1st, 2006, 4:49 pm ]
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It's an awesome poem Leaha, it reminds me of penguins!!!! It's really cool rhyming dude

Author:  FRODOFAN [ July 3rd, 2006, 6:48 pm ]
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A very interesting rhyme scheme. Pleasure to read. Keep writing.

Author:  FĂ­riel_18190 [ July 4th, 2006, 4:24 pm ]
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yeah, a nice poem indeed, I really like it

Author:  Annabel Lee [ July 6th, 2006, 3:42 am ]
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Thank You this is one of my personal favorites.... I need to put all my poems on one thread.... :confused:

Author:  Ashwise [ July 8th, 2006, 5:38 pm ]
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I like it!

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