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Author:  Jax Nova [ July 8th, 2006, 6:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Unseen Emotion
"Unseen Emotion"


There it is again,
Floating on the wind.
A haunting image love,
That hunts me down again.

It's image white as snow,
As through the night we go.
Entangled in this snare,
Of lies that say "I care."

But I can't see anymore,
I can't hear anybody.
Am I living still,
Will my heart fill?

When I'm driving down the road,
I can't see where to go.
I can't remember how to drive,
I just know that it's alive!

Is it real or is it me,
Why can't I see?!
I'm so preoccupied,
Distracted and denied.

There it is again,
Floating on the wind.
And I wonder is it real?
Because it now is all I feel.

I can't hold it or touch it,
I can't see it or be with it.
But somehow I feel it's an option,
If I really want it.

And there it is again,
Floating on the wind...
Author:  Azura Undómë [ July 9th, 2006, 5:59 pm ]
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:jawdrop:

Thats a beautifull poem!

I love it!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 9th, 2006, 10:12 pm ]
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OMG, I luv that Jax!! It's so awesome!! Wow, u have such a way w/ words.....i can kinda relate to that poem, 2. Nicely done. (as usual;))
Author:  Azura Undómë [ July 10th, 2006, 2:28 am ]
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I agree :-D
Author:  Jax Nova [ July 10th, 2006, 3:26 pm ]
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:) Glad you liked it. And yeah... that's one I wrote from personal experiance. It's cryptic in relation tomy own experiance but it gets the point across good enough to satisy me. lol
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 10th, 2006, 4:20 pm ]
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I love it, as always. :) It's beautiful, Jax!!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 11th, 2006, 10:57 am ]
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i agree!! it's awesome!! :-D (as usual)
Author:  Dunadariel [ July 16th, 2006, 3:14 pm ]
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Okay, Jax, I'm on a roll to read all your poetry!!!! I really like htis one, especially how you return to the theme "There it is agian..." a few times. I like that idea. Good poetry! (and I do hope htis post is not too antiquated for my comments, if so, I crave pardon.) :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ July 17th, 2006, 2:40 pm ]
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Well, it's there to read. I am just glad you guy slike it and that God makes it come out as good as He does. :)

And your post is fine, it is after all, your post. :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 21st, 2006, 5:46 pm ]
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*bump* :angel:
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