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Author: | Jax Nova [ July 8th, 2006, 6:07 pm ] |
Post subject: | Unseen Emotion |
"Unseen Emotion" There it is again, Floating on the wind. A haunting image love, That hunts me down again. It's image white as snow, As through the night we go. Entangled in this snare, Of lies that say "I care." But I can't see anymore, I can't hear anybody. Am I living still, Will my heart fill? When I'm driving down the road, I can't see where to go. I can't remember how to drive, I just know that it's alive! Is it real or is it me, Why can't I see?! I'm so preoccupied, Distracted and denied. There it is again, Floating on the wind. And I wonder is it real? Because it now is all I feel. I can't hold it or touch it, I can't see it or be with it. But somehow I feel it's an option, If I really want it. And there it is again, Floating on the wind... |
Author: | Azura Undómë [ July 9th, 2006, 5:59 pm ] |
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![]() Thats a beautifull poem! I love it! |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 9th, 2006, 10:12 pm ] |
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OMG, I luv that Jax!! It's so awesome!! Wow, u have such a way w/ words.....i can kinda relate to that poem, 2. Nicely done. (as usual;)) |
Author: | Azura Undómë [ July 10th, 2006, 2:28 am ] |
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I agree ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ July 10th, 2006, 3:26 pm ] |
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Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 10th, 2006, 4:20 pm ] |
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I love it, as always. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 11th, 2006, 10:57 am ] |
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i agree!! it's awesome!! ![]() |
Author: | Dunadariel [ July 16th, 2006, 3:14 pm ] |
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Okay, Jax, I'm on a roll to read all your poetry!!!! I really like htis one, especially how you return to the theme "There it is agian..." a few times. I like that idea. Good poetry! (and I do hope htis post is not too antiquated for my comments, if so, I crave pardon.) ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ July 17th, 2006, 2:40 pm ] |
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Well, it's there to read. I am just glad you guy slike it and that God makes it come out as good as He does. ![]() And your post is fine, it is after all, your post. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 21st, 2006, 5:46 pm ] |
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*bump* ![]() |
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