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Author:  Will [ July 27th, 2006, 8:26 am ]
Post subject:  Twilight (Poem)
So I just wrote this down the other day. What do you think?


Twilight

Faint dreams as reflection, whispers calling for me
No hope, no love
Just a memory, skies filled with stars and sunsets reflecting in sea

Long I have dwelled in darkness
Only lies, only mistrust
You taught me to live, laugh, love, curing my blindness

Yet short we lived these happy times, a shadow came over us
The sorrow, the loneliness
Bearing the pain of a broken heart of the one I could trust

Longer I will linger, even further away
Just grief, just pain
Guidance of your love will never lead me astray

In twilight...
Author:  Sam the Brave [ July 27th, 2006, 9:08 am ]
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YEAH! YOU DID IT! See, you not bad! I told you!

I love it. It's very mysterious :-D *makes a mysterious face*

Sam
Author:  Will [ July 27th, 2006, 9:12 am ]
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Thanks Sam :blush: I didn't really thought it to be good or something..

Thanks! :hug: *hugs*
Author:  Sam the Brave [ July 27th, 2006, 9:40 am ]
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Keep up the good work! I was looking for some comments on my other piece...the vietnam thing...if you have a moment :-D

sam
Author:  Will [ July 27th, 2006, 11:37 am ]
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I shall look it up! :) I have to go now, but tonight I'll look at it. (I noticed it was almost an A4 of text so I have to read it when I've time) ;)
Author:  Sam the Brave [ July 27th, 2006, 11:40 am ]
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Thankies! Keep up the good work!

Sam
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