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 Post subject: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 17th, 2015, 12:55 am 
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So, I'm bored and there is no where else to post. :P HAha.


This is my website my brother is helping me run for the world I created for the setting for some of my poetry books and novels. It's a fantasy/medieval world.

http://varsiankingdom.com/

:) Enjoy and if you are so inclined I am always looking for advice, tips, suggestions, and comments!

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 17th, 2015, 2:52 am 
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Very nice! You guys have obviously put a lot of work into it! It looks very professional. :)

I read an excerpt too. Your writings are interesting. I hope you continue with your works!! :)

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 17th, 2015, 5:18 pm 
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Thanks! :) I'm glad to hear that. We had a few revisions to get it to where it is.

yeah, if nothing else writing is about the funnest hobby ever... lol so even if I never make a living out of it I will keep writing. (Though it would be awesome to make a living at it :P )


Any helpful hints, tips, or ideas? I'm always wondering about ways to improve the site or my writing.

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 19th, 2015, 4:53 pm 
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You're welcome! :)

I don't have any suggestions for site improvement. It looks really good. :)

And for your writing, I don't know. ;P Maybe you could have some beta readers to give you feedback on what they like and
don't like about your work. It might be helpful in seeing things you
don't catch on your own or opening you mind to new ways of wording things. :) I think the other opinions could be helpful
in boosting creativity. :)

If you would like to make a living out of it, like if it's your dream, go for it my friend!! It's what my brother in law wants too. He like you has some great story ideas. If it's what you really love chances are you are meant to do it. Never take your deams lightly. :)

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 19th, 2015, 6:50 pm 
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Thanks. I do appreciate it.

I have thought about doing some betta readers and have couple lined up (mostly family) for after I get the first proof coppies of my book done.

Would you happen to be interested in reading the whole book as a betta reader in digital format? lol Only if you would really be interested. If not I actually have an idea of where I might be able to find a couple people who are not relatives and thus give a mroe un-bias opinion.

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 21st, 2015, 2:42 pm 
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You're welcome mellon~ :)

Sure, I will read it! :) I am honored to be asked. Someday when
your book get famous I can brag that I read it before publication
lol.

Just give me the details on what you all want from the beta readers. :)

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 Post subject: Re: The Varsian Kingdom Website
PostPosted: February 22nd, 2015, 2:02 am 
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Cool. :) It will be good to have un-related un-bias opinions on the book. You and another member (from AU actually) will be the first two to read it.

I will PM you the details.

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