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Is this a good plot?
Yea, its very exciting! 58%  58%  [ 7 ]
Its Alright 42%  42%  [ 5 ]
Dunno 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Nah, not really 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It's rubbish! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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(I know, bet you didn't see that coming......and niether did I until about 3 seconds before I wrote it.) :roll:

Marisa kept looking at the ground and didn't get up.

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Cool!

Keira spat, some pathetic girl wasnt going to waste her time, she bent down and lashed out at Marisa, slapping her hard across the cheek.
Keira reached out and grabbed Marisa's collar, pulling her towards her and shoving the barrell of the uzi at her head.
"Are you going to get up?" snarled Keira, tightening her grip on Marisa. "Or do i have to force you?"

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"Shutup." Keira said calmly. She was in no mood, blood mixed with tears and sweat dripped down her face. She eyed Cortez.
"Don't point that thing at me.." she said angrily.

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Keira snarled, she pushed Marisa away and jumped upwards, knocking away Cortez's gun with her own uzi.
"I said dont POINT THAT AT ME!" she growled. It was one of those days, Keira knew Cortez was a friend, but her anger just kicked in, venomous rage flowing thru her blood.

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"What would Eva do then eh?" smirked Keira. She knew she was breaking the rules, but she could'nt control her anger, never could. I really need those anger management classes the docter offered she thought to herself.

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Marisa put th gun down and looked up at them both. She thought she saw something other than hate in Cortez's eyes but she couldn't be sure. She stood up, still eyeing Keira's gun suspiciously.

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Keira sighed and breathed hard, taking long deep breathes.
"Come on then." she whispered to Marisa, holstering her Uzi and taking hold of Marisa's sleeve gently.
Keira did'nt know what was going on, she felt so tired all of a sudden.

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The anger came flooding back.
"Fine!" she yelled, letting go of Marisa. "I try so hard to control my anger! but it never helps with you around!"

"Keira!" came a voice. She span round, hearing her name.
There stood a prety girl with a dirty blood covered face, limping towards her, a great bullet hole gourged into her shin, her leg a shiny sticky red.
"Amber!" cried Keira. "What the hell happened?"

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Marisa let herself be taken by the arm by Cortez who seemed somewhat more humane than the others. She was hot, thirsty and suddenly trembling although she didn't know why exactly.

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Marisa looked up at the man, "Thank you." She whispered and took the gun.

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"Um.. got a little heated back there!" grinned Amber, trying to ignore the pain, she was a brave girl and was trying to show it.
"I'm sorry." said Keira, feeling guilty for leavng her behind. "Here, sit down."

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Amber blushed.
"Darklight." she whispered. This was the second time in one day. " But What about Eva, she'll kill us!" Amber nodded towards Keira.
Who was sitting, head buried in heads. "Yea, too right she will." she mumbled.

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Annalett was right behind Amber, aware her friend was in great pain.

John stood on the side of the rode, waiting for the others, standing guard. When he saw Cortez, and Merrisa, he glanced there way and thought, He will probably take her to Darklight. Then he dashed into the forest in search of Amber, Annalett, and Kiera...

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I am comfused, did Cortez talk to Amber or Marisa about injuries?

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[sorry about that... I had just sent that when I noticed that... and he's talking to Merrisa about the wounds...]

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Ooops! :(

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