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Post subject:  Posted: August 9th, 2006, 11:36 am |
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Very well, we can start now if ye want......
The year is 1182 (or thereabouts methinks) and balian, future Baron of Ibelin is travelling with his Father, Godfrey and his Knights. Balian seeks to find forgivness for his sins in Jerusalem, for he has killed a preist. His wife killed herself, and thus she is in hell, he seeks to redeem that and get her into heaven.
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 11:49 am |
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Here's my Charrie again^^
Name : Lady Caterina of Wessex, the North-Downs, and the town of Hattersfield on Themse, Knight of the Realm
Age: 22
Hair: a thick amount of long, sleek, midnight black hair with slight waves near the bottom
Eyes: emerald, speckeled with deep gold (most prominent thing about her)
Lineage:
Mother: Elizabeth of the Kingdom of Great Britain
Father: Alexos of the Kingdom of Great Britain
Siblings: [very weird, but this is the way I wrote it...] Lord Salahadin and his sister
Married: was, to a man named Nensamus of the Kingdom of France
Weapons : A long, light long sword in a blending silver colour, a dragonlike creature also engraved, a set of arrows and a delicate but strong bow
Occupation: On her way to Jerusalem on request of the King there
Pic: http://img419.imageshack.us/img419/7034/cat6dn.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/5953 ... catac6.jpg
History:
Born in London, grew up in Hampfordshire and Hattersfield. Her father took to drinking after the murder of his wife, the much hoped for Elizabeth 'Queen of Endland', and never really understood that he had two twin daughters, and not a son. (Her sister ran away to live with her husband at an early age, whereas her sister Cat- as she is commonly known- stayed, and was treated as a squire by her father and so learnt swordsmanship, and became the best Archer in the land. Her father Alexos, suddenly disappeared, and was presomed dead by the realm, though his daughter never gave up hope of finding him. She travelled to Damaskus, where she met Godfrey of Ibelin, a close friend of her fathers, who took good care of her for the time she allowd it, and her half brother the Sultan Salahadin. Upon not finding her father, she left the road of the knight that her father had bestowed on her, and spent time becoming a great sailor, and eventually a pirate of the Mediterainean. The fact that she was a woman never halted her, as she was gifted in looks and mind, and even today can twist men around her finger and give them false hopes, whereas her heart stays true to a secret lover. _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:02 pm |
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(welcome, rhavaniel.)
Balian rode aside his father at the front of the train.
"Are we to trust one of her like, father?" he asked Godfrey, digging his heels in the flanks of his horse, keeping up with his father. "If what you told me is true, she is the sister of King Salahadin. You said you have known her for years, but she may be a spy or somewhat." he said quietly.
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:07 pm |
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(yes halarond it would be historically 1182 because richard the lionhearted met balian in 1183)(they called saladin Salah-Ahl -Din)
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:22 pm |
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(Yes, I thought so... and I wanted to put Sal-ah-ha-din because ppl call him sal-a-din too much and wanted to get away from that.. but thanks  )
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:29 pm |
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(my bad I checked it and it is Salah-ha-din it just looks more correct like the way I listed it it looks kinda weird like this:salahadin so it isn't Salah ahl din)
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:40 pm |
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Arestina was in the city stables saddling her pure white Arabian stallion she mounted her stallion and started to ride it aound the city she rode past Calum's house and left a note from the king that she had been sent to deliver the note said:
dear citizens,
news has reached my ears that the baron of Ibelin and an army are on their way to the city a hospitallar(The knight/doctor) is coming and also sending men are the Templars. Please be ready for their arrival.Signed,
King Baldwin
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:41 pm |
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oo I dont know, it may be the way you spelled it...  dunno, oh well
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 12:50 pm |
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Calum just finished sharpening his blade when he heard the sound of footsteps at his door. When he opened it there was nobody around, nothing, save for a note pinned to his door.
dear citizens,
news has reached my ears that the baron of Ibelin and an army are on their way to the city the hospitallars are also sending men as well as the Templars. Please be ready for their arrival
He set the note down on the wooden table with a smile. Now was his time for revenge. Setting his newly sharpened sword on the table he went on a search to get materials ready for the Baron's arrival
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:09 pm |
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Cat sat back, and folded her legs under her, as she listned to the Szarazen missionary, who had entered her housing, then nodded briefly, and waved him away. Switching back to english, she turned her head to her advisor; William Cecil .
"Well? What do you think?"
"I think you should be carefull to stay on your feet, and not off them." he murmered in reply, yet holding out her doublet. With a grin, she leapt up, hair flowing like ink down her back, grabbed it, and disappeared out of the dimly lit room. The old man smiled to himself and shook her head.
She quickly let a heavy cloak fall around her shoulders, and strapped her sword to the side, adjusted her ring, made sure that her belt held her clothing in place, and mounted her fine black stallion, tethered outside. With a chuckled "Here we go again," she squezzed the flanks, and shot off into the sinking sun.
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:23 pm |
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After putting her horse into the stables she walked back to Calums house and knocked on the door.Arestina waited for calum to open the door she had her sword with her for her next lesson in advanced swordfighting. I hope Calum liked the notice maybe then he could go to war and get his revenge Arestina thought then she waited for him to answer
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:26 pm |
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Godfrey looked upon his son, he chuckled "trust one of her like?! spy or somewhat! son, in jerusalem we all live toghether in peace, or at least we try between salahadin and the king, salahadin needs no spy...and if she were a danger to me she would have killed me long ago" he assured his son
(question! according to bailian cat is with us, but cat has spoken and says she is alone riding into the sinking sun....and i am quite confused)
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:32 pm |
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[Ah.. I did'nt know Cat was with you^^" Lets say she had to meet the scaracen, and is coming back to meet them now]
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:33 pm |
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Calum was just putting some clothes in a small satchel when he heard a knock at his door. Walking over to it he opened it and smiled when Arestina stood before him. Pulling her into a hug he kissed her cheek in a friendly manner.
"Hello Arestina..."
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:39 pm |
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Rhavaniel Falathiel wrote: [Ah.. I did'nt know Cat was with you^^" Lets say she had to meet the scaracen, and is coming back to meet them now]
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Post subject: Posted: August 9th, 2006, 1:41 pm |
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Arestina hugged him back as she hadn't seen him in two weeks since she had been busy with the king as her father was a gaurd of the kings Elite squad and a millitary advisor but there was another advisor elected since her father's death.
"I'm here for another lesson and to ask you if you liked the letter the king gave them to me for all families who have soldiers in them"Arestina said
"I need to sharpen up my skills before I had to go two weeks ago you were going to teach me the gaurd of the hawk but you forgot."
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