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 Post subject: DIVIDED: Fantasy Literate and Semi-Scripted
PostPosted: October 12th, 2006, 9:48 pm 
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WELCOME TO DIVIDED: A Fantasy Literate and Semi-Scripted RP

This is my first totally made-up, original rp so please bear with it.

RULES:
1. No power-playing
2. Try to keep posts at least 5 sentences long
3. Please post in third person narration
4. Romance is allowed
5. Try to use correct spelling and punctuation
6. Use () {} [] when you’re out of character
7. Please be courteous to other rpers
8. PLEASE BE REALISTIC

SETTING: A mythical world call Algoria in what we would call medieval ages. Starts in the middle of a thick forest close to a rebel camp. Eventually the rp will make its way to the Plandin Plains for the final battle.

PLOT: In the beginning the Duke of Iliad, Galias, who was the cousin of the king, was power thirsty. He did not care for the people or their needs but simply to have things run his way and to enjoy the luxuries of royalty. The king at the time did not have any brothers or heirs so if he died Galias would be king. However, he could not simply kill him because his lands were on the other side of Algoria. If the king died while he was visiting, naturally, the court would become suspicious. The matter was easily resolved when he hired Ethen, the Queen’s handmaiden and who was also in love with Galias, to pour poison into the King’s ear as he slept each night. As he died, Galias was crowned as the king. Galias, has been ruling for thirty years. Ethen, who is by nature sweet and quiet, serves him still. In that time, he has severely oppressed his people. Taxes are high, rules are strict. If he captures one who opposes him they are quartered and drawn then starved to death. He disposes of anyone who is a threat to him. To keep villagers from sneaking off at night, he has released his minions, the Nocturn, into the forest. He is relocating or exterminating several magical races. He takes 90% of the peasants’ harvest. While he sits at banquet, his people starve. His subjects are abused by his soldiers. The people have become divided. Rebels have started camps deep within the forests of Algoria. There they are gathering an army of farmers and blacksmiths. But many also remain dedicated to the King hoping to be rewarded for their loyalty. The Nocturn search for these rebels, the loyalists feud with the defiant ones, and some of the magical creatures are beginning their own plans for war. A revolution is about to break out. In this mass of confusion, where do you stand?

RACES:

Humans: I hope this one is self explanatory.

Elves: I hope everyone here knows what an elf is too. Pointy ears, mysterious, live in the woods. They can only die if they are poisoned or wounded with a weapon. If you are an elf you may chose from these powers: foresight, mind communication, controlling plants, or talking with animals.

Vritch: Only two spots left. A Vritch is a powerful and rare race. They are hunted down by Galias, who hopes to obtain their secrets. They are half human, half witch. They look human except they have purple eyes and usually white or light hair. Vritch can make potions, scry, telekinetic, and a number of other things. If you join as a Vritch, I will tell you your main powers.

Nocturn: Only 3 spots left. The Nocturn are deadly creatures of the night. They have two forms. Their daylight form is humanlike with dark eyes, dark hair, olive complexion, with a devil’s tail and usually wearing dark clothing. Their night form is similar to the creatures off of Tomb Raider: the Cradle of Life. They are large but fast creatures that appear to have dark leathery skin, almost like a cross between a large cat and a reptile. They have a large jaw of razor sharp teeth and they can hide inside their surroundings. E.i. they can become part of the tree and then come out in their form. However, they can only see you if you are moving. They hunt the forests at night, seeking out the rebels.

Centaurs: bottom half is horse, top half is human. No useful magical abilities but a good eye. They are fast and are particularly good at archery.

Dragon: I think most of us know what a dragon is

Planis: A cat-like creature. They have tails, fangs, and their nails extend, becoming claws, and then retracts. They have sharp smelling senses, good balance, and great agility. For the most part they resemble humans but they can have unusual eye and hair colors.

Nymph: Beautiful elfish creatures. The most popular is a forest nymph but there are such things as nymphs controlling other elements. They love causing mischief. They use their powers by singing. Each Nymph has a certain element.
-Forest Nymphs: control plants and can communicate with animals. If they have enough training, they may transform into trees or animals.
-Water Nymphs: Can control small quantities of water. They live in rivers and lakes and very rarely do they come on dry land. But when they do they can use the moisture in the air.
-Fire Nymphs: Can control or create small quantities of fire. Generally live in hotter regions.
-Air Nymphs: These nymphs can control dust devils or small gusts of wind. But their main power is the ability to become wind or air.

GEOGRAPHY OF ALGORIA

PLACES/ LANDFORMS:

Summer Sea: the ocean surrounding Algoria
Eldenswell: One of the largest forests in Algoria. It starts in the Great Valley and goes into the Appaline Mountain Range
-White Leaf: The main rebel camp hidden in Eldenswell
-Cutthroat: A second camp a few miles east of White Leaf
-Sinel: Small fief on the edge of Eldenswell
Appaline Mountain Range: The largest mountain range in Algoria.
-Iliad: formerly Galias’s fief, now is large mountain village
-Snow Camp: A rebels’ camp hidden on one of the mountain’s summits
-The Black Mountain:Stands at the very end of the Appaline Mountain Range, surrounded by dark woods and smoke rises from three spots on the mountain side. Many have speculated this, but have come to believe that it is the work of dwarves. The black mountain has a reputation that people have gone missing around it as, if the earth has swalloved them and is avoided by many. In the shadowy caverns of the mountain a greedy being prepares along with his armies to strike.
The Plandin Plains: a large flat Northwest region of meadow that extends for miles and miles and takes a good five days to cross.
-Silcen: Capital of Algoria on the edge of the Summer Sea. Carved into one of the small mountains. The palace and fort are on a cliff face looking over the port below.


BODIES OF WATER/RIVERS

The Moon Mirror: A small pool of water that never dries up and is hidden in Algoria. It is considered a mere fairytale among humans but it is a strong belief in magical races. In this pool you can see your reflection perfectly. Those with foresight can see the future or scry in it. And if it chooses, it may show your destiny.

Lagthen River: The main water source running through Algoria. It starts on the shore near Eldenswell then runs through small forests and into the Appaline mountains.

The Crescent Tributary: A small tributary that runs from the Lagthen river. It provides water for both the White Leaf Camp and the Cutthroat Camp.

Xinel River: This is the only river that goes through the Plandin Plains. It starts in the Appaline Mountains and then runs to the Summer Sea near Silcen.


Character Sheet:
Name:
Race:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Occupation: if applicable
Weapons: if applicable
Powers/Element: if applicable
Loyalty: if applicable
History: optional

CHARACTERS:

Gladias-

REBELS:
Lana-Vritch-Falathiel Lothendhel
Korinth-Vritch-Nauriel Rochnur
Avalyn-Forest Nymph-Star_Gazer
Aldaar -Human-Captian Faramir
Andenth Umskal-Human-Darell
Erkanis Haordwan-Elf-Caunion the Frost Lord
Ilythiiri-Vritch-Meldawen
Emarnia-Dragon-Caunion the Frost Lord
Koltok-Centaur-Nauriel Rochnur
Meleth-Elf-Meldawen
Rieltar-Dwarf-Curunir


LOYALISTS:
Ethen-Human-Falathiel Lothendhel

NOCTURN:
Yaska-Falathiel Lothendhel


NEUTRAL/MAGICAL CREATURES MAKING OWN PLANS:
Alya-Planis-Falathiel Lothendhel
Kharandros -Dragon-Loyal to the Black Mountain-Curunir

Wow that’s the longest rp introduction I’ve ever written. I'm detail-oriented. So please start joining! And have fun! If you have any questions about the plot or story feel free to ask.


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PostPosted: October 12th, 2006, 9:57 pm 
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Name: Lana
Race: Vritch
Gender: female
Age: appears 18 but is more along the lines of 200
Appearance:pale silver/whiteish hair, purple eyes, tall and slender with a dancers build and strength.
Personality: Luna is tenatious and a bit tempestous. She pushes herself and those around her. She likes to be right and has a bit of a hard time being wrong. She's confident and can be a little obnoxious sometimes. She is often mistaken for mean and hot-headed but things in her past have led her to be so.
Occupation: A General in the army at White Leaf
Weapons: sword or glaive.
Powers/Element: telekinetics, telepathy, scrying, and fire
Loyalty: rebels
History: From a young age, Lana has been resented and shunned by others. She was beaten and cast out of villages for being a vritch. Her mother was murdered in front of her. Once she was held captive by Gladias and nearly burned at the stake. Not much is known about it but more will be revealed in the rp.


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PostPosted: October 12th, 2006, 10:31 pm 
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How many characters can we have? I would like to be a vritch, but at the moment I am short of time, so I will make a bio later.


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PostPosted: October 12th, 2006, 10:50 pm 
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ok, I have a vritch spot saved for you


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PostPosted: October 13th, 2006, 1:17 pm 
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Can you save spots for an elf, a nymph and a human for me? I'll come up with a coupel bios tomorrow.

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PostPosted: October 13th, 2006, 2:10 pm 
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Can you save me a spot for an nymph please? thank you! :D (I am going to post my bio either later today or tomarrow.)

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PostPosted: October 13th, 2006, 6:51 pm 
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I'd like to save a spot for a Planis! I'll get my bio in later.


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PostPosted: October 13th, 2006, 6:54 pm 
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I have my bios!
For the Vritch
Name: Korinth
Race: Vritch
Gender:Male
Age: Really old, but only looks about 24
Appearance: Pale hair with a small tint of red. Deep grey-purple eyes. Tall and muscular, he is very graceful.
Personality: Once he has his mind set, he finds it hard to change. He's stubborn, extremely close to the point of being obstinate and rude. Jokes a lot.
Occupation: Travels from rebel camp to rebel camp, keeping them updated. (Basically he's a messenger boy, but that doesn't sound very cool)
Weapons: Glaive, and lots of daggers. Possibly a bow.
Powers/Element: potions, scry, telekinetic, and a number of other things
Loyalty: rebels
History: He was born in a small villiage among others of his kind. When Galias becaome king and started oppressing the people, Korinth knew he had to fight.

Can I have two other characters? A centaur, and a wood nymph?


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PostPosted: October 13th, 2006, 9:43 pm 
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Name: Avalyn
Race: Forest Nymph
Gender: Female
Age: 200; would be considered about 22 in human years.
Appearance: Tall, strongly build, but skinny. Long, straight blonde hair that almost goes down to her waist - most of the time it is back in a long braid. Bright, unmistakable green eyes. She mostly wears simple dresses, or a tunic and leggings. Which are mainly greens and very light browns.
Personality: Less mysterious than most nymphs, mischievious, joyful, and yet very serious at the same time. Is very humorous and very outgoing
Occupation: None
Weapons: When needed, she has a long, one-handed elvish sword
Powers/Element: Forest nymph powers
Loyalty: Rebel
History: Unknown

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Name: Aldaar
Race: Human
Gender: Men
Age: 19
Appearence: Tall, short black hair, brown eyes, brown skin. wore leather jacket which has a light brown colour, silky shirt and leather pants.
Personality: Leadership, funny, stubborn
Occupation: Leader of the rebel humans that lives nearby in Elderwen
Weapons: Sword, dagger
Powers/Element: None if you do not count as a power the fighting skills
Loyalty: Rebel
History: Before Galias was crowned and releasing his minions to massacre them, he was a blacksmith in his village. After minions have arrived, he ran far away. And set up his own rebel forces but his force is not that much considering Galias's army.

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[This sounds like it could be great fun! And I like the detailed intro Falathiel. I like being well informed :P]

Name: Andenth Umskal
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Appearance: Tall, with sharp blue eyes. Medium length hair, coming down to cover the back of his neck. Wears a light chainmail shirt, and a leather jerkin, for protection, along with bracers on his forearms. He also wears light, supple leather gloves. Normally he wears a long black cloak on top, covering everything beneath it.
Personality: Calm, and slightly grim, being slow to either anger or happiness. He is often fell before fights, and can be taken by a fey mood in the heat of combat.
Occupation: Warrior
Weapons: One handed sword, a long knife, and a bow.
Powers/Element: N/A
Loyalty: Rebels
History: Born as Galias took up the throne. Was raised in starvation, watched as his father was flogged for being unable to pay the taxes. Left the village he had grown up in young, and headed into Eldenswell, where he joined the rebellion. Has served the rebels loyally since, and is well respected amongst them.

[I hope that is ok. And if you would like another 'bad' character, just ask and I'll play one. :D]


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(I'll join)

Name: Erkanis Haordwan
Race: Elf
Gender: Male
Age: around 1,000
Appearance: Tall and gaunt, short black hair and bright green eyes, wears black lamellar armor over silk
Personality: Cold yet can open sometimes
Occupation: Heir to Lord Hasian
Weapons: Light curved sword with a curved dagger
Powers/Element: mind communication
Loyalty: Rebel
History: Despite his parents' wished, he had decided to join the Rebels after Galias' rule.

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Character Sheet:

Name: Kharandros
Race: Black Dragon
Gender: Male
Age: 4,500
Appearance: http://www.bergoiata.org/fe/dragons/BLA ... LPAPER.jpg
Personality: Quiet and pondering, sometimes makes sarcastic comments that greatly amuse him and he oftenly pretends to be far more lesser than he is as considers it to be wise. Yet he appears in the eyes of his servants as terrible and powerful.
Occupation: Dragon Lord
Weapons: His claws and acid breath
Powers/Element: He is able to cast spells, but mainly relies on his
Loyalty: Black Mountain (the name of his armies and organization)

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History:

Kharandros was born as perhaps not the strongest, but most certainly as the most cunniest of his siblings as there were 6 of them. He never gave much credit to them nor did he care for them, as he was old enough he left to live alone. He chose a dark mountain by the name of Athandroc located at the end of the Appaline Mountain Range, surrounded by dark forests where the creatures of the night lurked. In time he gathered immense wealth and began to build his power, he was quiet well aware of what happened in the kingdom trough his spies yet stayed in the shadows. He was angered by the fact as he heard that dragon were hunted like some other races, one by one his siblings and mother fell in the hands of adventurers, mercenaries and other groups eventually. But that was nothing compared to the advantage this new king gave him.

The change of power and the cruelness that it created only served the purposes of Kharandros as to drove humans into his service or to the rebels. He has not made a clear agenda yet, but it seems that he is preparing for something. He has gathered humans, orcs, half orcs and even dark dwarves into his service. Around and inside Athandroc he has created a vast network on tunnels, his dwarven smthies create weaponry for his armies, ruthless training goes on in the dark halls of Athandroc and his influence grows. His people have began to call the whole power, the black mountain as the mountain as seemed to darken and their lord is referred as the `black one`. Kharandros waits in the dark caverns of his mountain, waiting for his time to come as his armies prepare....

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Let him curse my name, but remember the truth!


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All spots are saved. Nauriel, you may join as many charries as you'd like. I'll probably be joing a few more myself. ;)

Name: Yaska
Race:Nocturn
Gender:female
Age: unknown
Appearance: Basic nocturn; in daylight form she has dark purple hair and black eyes. Tall and wears black leather.
Personality: She is quiet and prefers her night form. She loves to feast and kill though only because it is in her nature. Yaska likes to be alone and instead of hunting with the rest of the Nocturn, she prefers to independently hunts.
Powers: Basic nocturn powers


Name: Alya
Race: Planis
Gender:female
Age:unknown looks about twenty
Appearance:Short and slender with white hair and yellow eyes. She usually wears a green tunic, brown breeches, with dark riding boots.
Personality: Alya is curious. She'll defy her elders if she is interested in something. She is stubborn and cunning but she doesn't really think before she acts.
Occupation: none
Weapons: hunting knife, bow and quiver of arrows
Powers/Element: n/a
Loyalty: neutral
History: There is not much to be said about her history. Since she was born, she has lived in Eldenswell. Safely hidden among, the trees she was mentored by another planis, Bran. But recently he has died and since then she has merely tried to survive on her own.

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PostPosted: October 14th, 2006, 3:10 pm 
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Just because I happen to have a very Vritch-like character already, I'll join as one of those. I was originally going to be an elf and a human and nymph too...but for now we'll just have the Vritch because I'm short on time :D

Name: Ilythiiri
Race: Vritch
Gender: female
Age: Very young, fifteen or so. She doesn't know exactly, but she looks very young.
Appearance: Purple eyes and white-blonde hair. Very dark skin. Extremely slender and of below average height, and looks younger than she is.
Personality: Cautious, a little shy, quiet but opinionated, and not averse to admitting abject terror. Tries very hard not to be open with her emotions but is very sensitive and rather obvious.
Occupation: none, other than a runaway
Weapons: none, though she hopes to acquire some.
Powers/Element: Excels at making potions, rapidly healing herself and turning invisible for short periods of time.
Loyalty: Rebel
History: Ilythiiri was held captive by Galias from a very young age and only recently escaped to the rebel camp at Eldenswell. She is terrified of him and very reluctant to venture out, but is becoming braver.

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Meldawen thanks for joining. :-D


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