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Post subject:  Posted: January 26th, 2007, 11:24 pm |
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Well... I loved that story. Say, I have a story with a character in it named E.Z. Lewis, and I want a good name for the "E" in it. Here are some of my choices:
Eye
Eos
Emel
Evren
Whadaya think?
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Post subject: Posted: January 27th, 2007, 1:18 am |
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I like Ezekiel. Teehee. And the EZ is just a nickname. You know?
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Post subject: Posted: January 27th, 2007, 5:40 pm |
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Girl. I guess you can't really tell from the waky names!!! I got those names off Behind the Name.com adn they were all listed under female. I like Erin though...
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Post subject: Posted: January 27th, 2007, 8:10 pm |
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Oh, haha. Well yes, Erin's funny. I like Evelyn too.
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Post subject: Posted: January 27th, 2007, 10:11 pm |
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I like the name Evren, if you dont use that name may i use it for a short story?
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Post subject: Posted: January 28th, 2007, 2:04 am |
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*Ventures in* I think I shall join this club. Lately I've had a lot of stories floating around in my head  _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: January 29th, 2007, 1:44 pm |
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Dark, Queen of Angmar wrote: I like the name Evren, if you dont use that name may i use it for a short story?
Evren is definately good. Go ahead and use it by the way!! I'm looking forward to seeing how you'll use the name... I mean for what kind of character. It's funny how a name can start to define a character... sometimes it's obvious, like 'Dark Queen of Angmar' for example!! But sometimes... idk, the character just starts to take on a role of its own because of the name. Maybe I'm wierd!! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: February 2nd, 2007, 10:42 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 11:13 am |
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It's pretty interesting! I like it!
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 12:28 pm |
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My friend wants to name her kids in our series Zane, Xander and Jaya...and my character's kids are going to be Tegan and Arret...do those names sound okay to you guys?
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 1:46 pm |
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They're cool Aramel! Very.. oh whats the word... gah, I hate when I forget a word and it's on the tip of my toung! Oh yeah.. original! Tegan.... I like that name...
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 2:24 pm |
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You're welcome! If it's alright, could you read my story? Link above, and in my siggy(clicky!). I could use ideas for titles for a few of the chapters, and for the title of the book/series!
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 2:37 pm |
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Thats interesting, and yes, I would love to read more!
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 5:36 pm |
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Beautifully written, good use of sensory words and description, and fully constructed setting. It seems you have a plot idea going, and I'm already curious as to the mayor's "gift." The only thing I would recommend is in
Quote: Her father, Aelred, was an important political figure in their country, and had been summoned by the King, Anselm, to serve in a bigger settlement, Caranith.
It doesn't flow along so smoothly. Try taking out a few appositives or breaking it up? Sorry, I tend to be picky 
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 5:53 pm |
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So, I'm trying to come up with a story, and the four main characters are named Airen, Rori, Rayog, and Strydeus, and I was wonderin' what you all thought of those.
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