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Post subject:  Posted: May 6th, 2008, 3:43 pm |
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 Turwaithiel! Glad to have you!  _________________ <center> 
Thanks to Revenge for the lovely set!
~Married Legolas of Gondolin April 6, 2006~<center>
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 7:43 pm |
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Thank you.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 8:02 pm |
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Has anyone posted anything in the Fanfiction section?
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 9:34 pm |
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I'm gonna post part of the next chapter of my story. I have to spell check it first, though.
And I'm tempted to write a short story called "the diary of a tomboy" or something like that... about how my life has changed so much in just one year... but I'm not sure if I'll do it, though.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:12 pm |
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That would be cool.
I am really wanting to write a story about a group of kids in a school in some gangster city.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:13 pm |
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I...want to find the courage to type of this random bit of sappy fic that spontaneously burst out of me yesterday XD
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:14 pm |
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*grants Ellethwen courage*
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:16 pm |
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I think you should go for it, both of you! I think writers should be spontanuous with what they write... like practice!
How about we all three write these stories that we're not sure if we should write or not? Just for the fun of it? And post them in this club?
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:27 pm |
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I think it would be better to post them in the Fanfiction section and then post the link to the newest posts when we are done because it will then be more organized.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:28 pm |
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okay, we could do that... the point is that we do it, right?
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2008, 10:31 pm |
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Yep. So, now I am going to have three different stories that I am writing, good thing that they are all VERY different. 
I will start this one when I finish preparing character names and development. _________________ <center>
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Post subject: Posted: May 8th, 2008, 6:22 pm |
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Ooh go for it, you guys! I'd be very interested in reading them! _________________ <center>
Thanks to Revenge for the lovely set!
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Post subject: Posted: May 9th, 2008, 6:00 pm |
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*sighs* *trudges off*
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*comes back*
Here you go, I typed it. You Remain.
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Post subject: Posted: May 9th, 2008, 11:50 pm |
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What would the world be without romantics?  I'll have a looksee! _________________ <center>
Thanks to Revenge for the lovely set!
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Post subject: Posted: May 27th, 2008, 10:39 pm |
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if anyone would like to do me a humongous favor, please follow the linkehs in my sig and tell me what you think of my fiction. i like them, i just need more opinions :]
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at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: May 27th, 2008, 11:03 pm |
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Location: P3X-774, Rohan, Moya, or my TARDIS
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*Jaw drop*
You're great! I love your writing! For some reason my computer can't follow the link to your fanfiction site. It makes me sad. I wants to read more!
I'm not much for critiquing, but I'll give it a go. I like you diction very much. You have a real sence for word order, and it makes your pieces have a nice fluid flow to them. Its not at all choppy, but you can still tell a good story without painfully drawing things out. I think it would be cool if you added a bit more personal thought to your characters, but its still really good.
Were you looking to have a particular aspect of you writing critiqued?
Okay, now its my turn to push my writing. I just finished writing the story of Vralnek, the typical villan of a typical Mary-Sue story.
http://www.arwen-undomiel.com/forum/vie ... hp?t=15208
(scroll down to my last post)
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