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 Post subject: "For you" - My first fan fic (LOTR)
PostPosted: August 19th, 2006, 4:31 pm 
Istari
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Well, this is a poem that deals with Arwen's relationship to Aragorn and that was written by her after he had left Rivendell with the fellowship.
It's my first piece of fan fic ever, so please comment on it. I hope you'll like it... :)

For you
(Arwen's poem to Aragorn)

Our love was only meant to be a dream-
A beautiful dream, but one with a sad ending
For you and me.

We both knew at once
That worlds lie between us two, but
For you and me that did not mean anything.

They said the fate of an Elf and a Man in love
Must always be bitter and full of sorrow, but
For you and me this seemed impossible.

From the hour we met life was full of joy,
We could not imagine to part one day,
For you and me nothing else existed except for our love.

Now as Middle-Earth lies under a dark shadow
Our predicted fate seems to become true, but
For you I try to change the course of time.

My life should go on and on forever,
Peacefully I should rest in the West, but
For you I decided to refuse this gift.

I will share the fate of LĂșthien,
I will spend my life at your side,
For you I have given up my immortality.

My decision was hard to understand for many,
I was told I would not be wise, but
For you I will take this risk.

My life is uncertain by now,
I do not know how it will continue, but
For you I will abandon my people.

I can hardly wait for the day when we shall meet again,
My heart feels so empty and cold, but
For you I will wait until the end of days.

I cannot go into the West anymore,
My decision made once cannot be changed, but
For you and me hope did never die and will never do so.



~by Rose (18 August 2006)

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2006, 4:41 pm 
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Let me be the first saying it: THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY SAD AND HEARTBREAKING! I LOVE IT! :-D

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2006, 5:08 pm 
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Thanks, gollum! :hug:
To be honest, I didn't know whether to post it here first. But I thought I should try it...;)

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Wow....that was beautiful and heart-breaking. It really captures Arwen's choice very well...sorry I'm not saying much...I'm just speechless...

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PostPosted: August 31st, 2006, 1:41 pm 
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Thanks, Esteleth! I'm glad that you like it. :)

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