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PostPosted: January 26th, 2007, 1:50 pm 
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Falling falling deep inside,
Hearts in twined and bound.
Together all the time's we've cried,
And brought out sorrows sound.

Falling falling deep within,
A soul and souls inside.
I've told You everything, all my sin,
You know the times I've "died"

I'm falling, falling Saviour Lord,
Catch me as You do!
You see my God, this falling word,
I'm falling deep in love with You.

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PostPosted: January 28th, 2007, 8:23 am 
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I LOVE all your poetry, Jax Nova!

It's absolutely beautiful.

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PostPosted: January 29th, 2007, 12:54 pm 
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lol thanks. :)

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Thats wonderful! I love it, Jax!

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PostPosted: January 30th, 2007, 12:37 am 
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I must agree...I do like your poetry...you're very talented....the rhythem and rhyme scheme is very well done and very difficult to accomplish.....

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Thanks glad you all liked it. :)

I just hope I can do something with the talent everyone says I have. lol

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I love it. :) You're just so good at poetry. :-D

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lol thanks. I am just glad that God can take all this jumbled stuff and make it come out and make some sense to people.

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You're such a good poet Jax! And I bet I'm not the fisrt to say that to you... You have a book out, right?

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amazing. it's short, but it's like.....idk, it doesnt need anymore; like u got across everything u needed 2 say in only 3 stanzas....amazing. U really inspire me. Keep it up. You're amazing. :-D

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Thanks everyone. :) I know I say it all the time but I am very glad you all like it. :) And it DOES mean more than you probabl realise. :)


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You're such a good poet Jax! And I bet I'm not the fisrt to say that to you... You have a book out, right?


Yeah, I do have a book out. It is on Amazon.com and several other places that I forget. lol

But it is called "Inspired Poetry" By Jason Hein

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