Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
Every time I see you you're the only thing I see more real than anything I know yet stranger than anyone else I can hardly stop my thoughts Every time I see you
Every time I see you I get so confused not knowing what's in your mind nor even what's in mine circles spin within circles Every time I see you
Every time I see you I have to stop myself from being swept away with the flow of the endless river that sweeps on day by day Every time I see you
Every time I see you I can't do a single thing afaraid to think afaraid to speak afaraid you'll fade away Every time I see you
Every time I see you I can't make up my mind take the plunge and plumet down turn around and don't look back or linger in between Every time I see you
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Wow, that's very nice and very well written. This is a very lovely piece of art. Nice flow and I like the repetativeness of the "Every time I see you"
Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
^Thanks for the compliments. I actually just decided to keep repeating 'Every time I see you' since I couldn't work out a way to connect the different parts of the poem...
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Nice flow and I like the repetativeness of the "Every time I see you" 
