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 Post subject: I'll Know and Near You rated G
PostPosted: March 17th, 2007, 11:54 am 
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Okay these are two little poems that were inspired by Skate (Lost's Sawyer and Kate) and D/Hr (Draco and Hermione). Of course I don't own anything I am just having a little fun. They are really fluffy so to speak but other than that nothing. So I gave it a G rating. Please read and let me know what you think.

(I'll know)

You have a wall surrounding you
You add your hateful remark right on cue
You want to be hated
Your actions and words are related
You just have to make the connection
It's easy to give them justification
You've been hurt yourself
So in turn you hurt every one else
You want them to hate you for the pain you inflict
You can't stand not to cause a conflict
I can see right through that bad boy act
And yet my heart is still in tact
You can say and do what you will
But I can tell what part of you is real
When you are ready to let me in, let me know
We'll take it slow
I'll show you the meaning of love
You will be put above
When you're ready to be called mine
When you're ready to try to walk the line
You don't really have to tell me
I'll be able to see
I'll allready know
Beause your actions will show
A bad boy's actions always say the oppisite of what they mean
It's easily seen

(Near You)

When I look up and you're not there
It's more than I can bare
I want you to be near
You're breath is what I want to hear
Right or wrong
I'll keep on singing our song
I can lose my way
But you're the reason for my day
I have a good heart
But being bad is my part
If I was you I would probabley run
As far away as the sun
That's what we're known to do
But I don't 'cause I want to be near you
So here I'll stay
If there is any doubt look in my eyes and it will go away

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PostPosted: March 20th, 2007, 10:33 am 
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hey, never watched the show and not much for love poetry honestly but I think you did a nice job one these. :) Good form and a nice flow. :)

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PostPosted: March 20th, 2007, 10:48 am 
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Oh, thank you for your extremly kinds words and for taking the time to respond. I'm glad that you liked it.

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