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Post subject: I am....(Rated G)  Posted: March 26th, 2007, 9:59 pm |
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idk where this came from....it just sorta randomly popped in2 my head 1day....it's not finished.....& wut i have is short....let me know wut u think! 
I am a dreamer,
Lost in my silent reverie.
I am a schemer,
Planning my escape from captivity.
I am a pretender,
Hiding behind my mask.
I am a contender,
Awaiting my next task.
I am a fighter,
Facing new battles each day.
I am a writer,
Trying to find the words to say. _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: March 27th, 2007, 1:19 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Awasome! I loved that very much pip! It's so expressive and I don't think it's to short aI think it works that way (at least for me)
Really nice wording and expression I can relate to it in many ways, but then again I think every one could a bit. lol
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Post subject: Posted: March 27th, 2007, 6:01 pm |
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aw, thanks so much jax:) ur comments mean a lot....tehy really do. thanks again....i'll add more, if i can ever think of anything....lol  thansk again _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: March 28th, 2007, 10:45 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Sure thing. Be sure to elt me know if you do add more.
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Post subject: Posted: March 28th, 2007, 11:29 am |
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will do!!!  lol thanks again. it rlly does mean a lot. _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2007, 11:58 pm |
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Joined: 24 March 2007
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Location: My own little world
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I'm impressed. I enjoyed reding that. You deserve all the praise you receive.
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Post subject: Posted: April 7th, 2007, 6:40 pm |
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aw, thanks means a lot.  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: April 7th, 2007, 8:57 pm |
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I loved it! 5 stars.
hmm..but one thing: perhaps it could be a bit longer...? 
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Post subject: Posted: April 7th, 2007, 10:31 pm |
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You're welcome.
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Post subject: Posted: April 8th, 2007, 7:06 pm |
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Shy wrote: I loved it! 5 stars. hmm..but one thing: perhaps it could be a bit longer...? thanks! & yea, it's not finished....i'll start a new thread, once i get more!  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: April 8th, 2007, 7:22 pm |
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So cool! That sounds a little like me for some reason... though who can't relate to that? It's good!
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Post subject: Posted: April 10th, 2007, 5:13 pm |
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lol thanks _________________
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Post subject: Posted: April 10th, 2007, 9:05 pm |
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Joined: 24 January 2007
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Location: my room talking to my internet pals..
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A-MA-ZING!!!! I <3 IT SOOOOOOO......MUCH!!!
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Post subject: Posted: April 13th, 2007, 5:35 pm |
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aw, thx.
i've written more, but i dont have it w/ me rite now....i'll post it on another thread asap! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: April 24th, 2007, 6:23 pm |
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Ummm... I'm just wondering.... did I write this poem at some point?? I may as well have. It sounds just like me. I guess that's no huge surprise though.  Very nicely done.
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Post subject: Posted: April 25th, 2007, 4:42 pm |
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lol thx i've written more, actually....just havent gotten around 2 posting it yet. :] _________________
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