Ellie, I commented in the contest section, but it's probaly more appropriate to talk about the poem here, so I'm going to elaborate a bit here.
Is it named Untitled on purpose? When I read it a word like Anonymous came into my mind...
I absolutely love the four opening lines. It's like it takes a turn when focus shifts onto the girl. Then it gets so sad. But the last four lines flow really well too. I would have loved if you elaborated on the middle part. I feel like hearing more about her life!
You have a great feel for words.. and yeah, it sounds so insignificant, but I find it really important in poetry, so it's meant to be a huge compliment
