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 Post subject: Your Hazel Eyes
PostPosted: August 7th, 2007, 4:26 pm 
Maia
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It was a dark, stormy time,
Before I saw your hazel eyes,
It was a crime, before my cries,
That I was ever denied
The sight of your hazel eyes.

You just walked in, crashed in my mind,
Then I saw your hazel eyes,
I left love behind, like he who denies,
But then you came,
Then I saw your hazel eyes.

Then you left, without a goodbye,
After I saw your hazel eyes,
Now I almost cry, whenever my roving mind espies,
Whenever I think of you,
After I saw your hazel eyes.


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PostPosted: August 7th, 2007, 5:26 pm 
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oh i rlly like this! nicely done! luv the subject & rhyming & everything. keep it up! ;)

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