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 Post subject: The Story of the Broken ((religion))
PostPosted: August 8th, 2007, 2:20 am 
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He opened the door with much of a care
Knowing that it would be lying right there
He picked it up and read the first couple of pages
Something that he had not read for ages

He flipped through aimlessly until he found something marked
Something about Noah and his massive ark
About God telling him the ways
To live through a flood for forty nights and days

It reminded him about a time in his life
Filled with much worry and strife
When he left her out in the rain
The night when he caused her so much pain

He drove away without looking back
With her sitting on her pack
He had nights with her that he now does regret
The times when he never did fret

Her belly was now big she was having a child
He knew his temper would never be that mild
So he dropped her off in the rain
Her will power was slain

He then looked back at he book
Reading something,he now shook
It was about Jesus being on the cross
Giving believers something that he thought he lost

But he continued reading about everyone’s sins being lifted
Something he had once thought he had lost was gifted
He believed with all of his sins that he was surely condemed
But he read that God had a different plan

He thought back at the bars he had been to
and the drugs he had taken
and thought the book was surely mistaken
but he kept on reading and knew that he was forsaken

How the one man had been saved at the very last moment
The time when there was so much torment
The book said he went to Heaven forever
To feel more pain never

Reading on in the precious book
About what Jesus had took
With nails thrust through his hands and feet
Taking hours to finally complete

Being put in the grave once he was dead
Many tears were then shed
Guards around his tomb
Most thought he was sent to his doom

Three days after the crucifiction was done
He awoke! he was the father’s son!
He ressurected and went to heaven
Asking his father for them to be forgiven

He closed the book trying not to cry
But failed with only one try
He lied down on the bed
and put his hands on his head

He prayed that he would be forgiven
That his soul would be cleansed
From the many sins he had commited
And he would not be condemed

He awoke the next morning
And got dressed for church
Thinking he would be shunned
Because of the people he hurt

He walked in and sat in the back
The power to speak he did lack
He went to the front that one faithful day
got down on his knees and bowed down to pray

When the preacher spoke up
He was the last one to leave
He asked if there was life after death
And the preacher agreed

He began to cry and leaned on the preacher
Telling him his story as if he were the teacher
His tale of hope and dispair
For the afterlife he wanted to prepair

After he finished he asked if God would be forgiving
Though all his sins would surely condem him
He said only you for your sins can pay
Through Jesus christ is your only way

He told the preacher he wanted to be saved
To meet with Jesus after his grave
the preacher told him to repeat a prayer
and said he would be grateful later

Afterwards he was sobbing
But his heart was no longer throbbing
As if his past was destroyed
and everything deployed

The years went by and he lived his life
Forgetting about his worry and strife
He then opened the same door
Without any care knowing that it would be lying right there

He read the first couple of pages
Something that felt like it wasn’t done for ages
Quietly his breath ran still
Knowing that he was filled

He knew he was going to heaven
he didn’t struggle
His breath quickly went
and his body was limp



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PostPosted: August 21st, 2007, 12:54 pm 
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Yay!!!!!!!!!!! :bounce: I'm glad someone else here is a Christian!!! Right...?
okay, so...uh, :bye2:

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