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 Post subject: Autumn
PostPosted: October 12th, 2007, 7:06 pm 


Heres a poem I wrote about lovely Autumn. If anyone cares to read it. (it'll take just 2 mins!!)

When the leaves fall,
Golden upon the ground,
Cascading beauty,
We know Autumn has come.

When the wind blows,
Gently swaying trees,
Creating harmony,
We know Summer has ended.

Singing softly,
Between tears.
So beautiful to see,
Autumn twilight illuminating.

Scarce whisper,
Between the breeze.
Sacredly taken in,
A feeling of yearning.


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PostPosted: October 26th, 2007, 7:21 pm 


Lol. I got a reader! yay! ^^


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PostPosted: October 27th, 2007, 11:51 am 
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Very nice. :)

Keep writing, it's nice to see people who can write poetry. I sure can't. :P

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PostPosted: December 14th, 2007, 10:54 am 
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A very pretty poem, I look forward to you writing some more!

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Ooh it's lovely :) I like it very much!

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PostPosted: January 8th, 2008, 11:17 am 
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beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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