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 Post subject: The Hunter and the Doe
PostPosted: February 21st, 2008, 10:41 pm 
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I peom I wrote for writing at school. I was told to write a poem and this is what I came up with.

The moon shone down
Onto the lake below.
Dew covered the ground
And there slept a doe.

A hunter slowly crept forward
As the doe slept and dreamed,
So nothing could warn
The deer of the hunter unseen.

He let loose an arrow
At the sleeping doe.
Deep the arrow burrowed
Into the heart, from the hunter's bow.

The deer now lay dead
At the feet of the hunter,
Who had joy unsaid
As it began to thunder.

The hunter grabbed his kill,
And made his way home
Where he had a small mill,
And a field freshly sown.

He now had enough meat
From the poor deer
To last him a week,
To a quarter of a year.

The skinning he did quickly,
With the skin put aside.
He let the meat for his meal start grilling,
On it's side.

Quite content with his catch
He noticed it was starting to storm.
He closed the door with a latch
So he could feel safe and secure.

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Very nice! Bravo!

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Very interesting subject. It flowed nicely and rymed well most of the time. :) Nice job :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bye2: :explode: .

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Thanks Jax, and Taxi!

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Good stuff!

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Thanks alot!

Wow... I think this is the poem that's gotten the most attention! lol.

This was just a quick thing I had to do for school...

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