Ok, well this is actually a song I wrote but i don't really know how to post the music so the words are going to have to do.

I thought I would post it and see what you all think.





When I walked out the door and said, "I'm leaving."
I didn't realize it would be for good.
And even though I didn't really have a reason,
I felt as though I should.

But it didn't really seem to matter,
You didn't really seem to want me to stay.
So I skipped all the mindless chatter,
And I turned and walked away.

Now I'm wondering where you are,
Are you looking at the stars?
Are they shining in your eyes,
As your lonely spirit cries?

Well, I didn't really think it was over,
The friendship we had shared so long.
I was sure that you would call and ask me over,
But I guess I was wrong.

Now, I picked up the phone to call your number,
But I was sure you wouldn't want to hear my voice.
So I hung up before I dialed the last number,
Because i thought I had no choice.

Now I'm wondering where you are,
Are you looking at the stars?
Are they shining in your eyes,
As your lonely spirit cries?
Well, they're shining in my eyes,
As my lonely spirit cries.

When I opened up the paper,
Tears fell down my face.
I saw the smoke and ashes,
From the fire at your place.

"One Dead," the headline read,
And I knew it was you.
My head spun with things I could have done,
But there's nothing now that I can do.

I knew right then I had killed you,
I couldn't believe what I had done.
It was Saturday night with nothing to do,
We should have been out having fun.

We both stayed home that evening,
We didn't want to see each other in town.
So we each stayed home in our grieving,
When we should have been hanging around.

Now I'm wondering where you are,
Are you looking down from the stars?
Are they shining like your eyes,
As my lonely spirit cries?

You'll always be shining in my eyes,
As my lonely spirit cries.
As my lonely spirit cries.

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Very good, Jax!! It's so sad, but well arranged. I would love to hear the music with it... it's really good!!

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Thanks

Yeah, it's sad. I was kind of in a semi-depressed mood when i wrote it so I guess that is reflected in the story of the song. Strangly enough it didn't come through to much in the music in my opinion... but who knows. *shrugs*

I would love to be able to post my actuall music because i never know whether it's any good or not. having other people listen to it and give their honest opinion would be a huge help... but there is no one I know in real life who could do that very well.

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If you have a digital camera with a video function on it, just start recording and play the tune on a guitar or what have you.Then just post a link to where the video is hosted and you are away. There is a thread where people post vids, so if you need ideas, then that could be useful.

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Hm... thanks interesting idea. But I actually dont' have a camera of any kind... And if I did I would have no idea how to get it to the internet and have no where to host it... lol sorry I am a bit iliterate when it ocmes to computer stuff. I just know what I need to knwo to do what I wana do.

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Amazingly arranged and written, Jax. I can really connect with the lyrics about losing friends and wishing I could've done something to get them back. It's a feeling which I hope no one else has to experience.

Glad to hear that. I personaly have no friends in real life, just on the internet so I have actually never dealt with this problem. So it's good to know I accurately captured the emotion in this.

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