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Post subject: Knight  Posted: June 18th, 2006, 11:41 pm |
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I came upon a night of silver
He had lost his way
On his horse of bay
I helped him to the town
In this town he came down
And thanked me for what I did
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Right then came a kid
He asked the knight for help
"Oh knight of Delp help"
He cried
A woman sighed
Foe that was her mischvious son
I patted my bun
and wringed my hands
FOr he was the fairest in all of the lands
_________________  "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
Last edited by Annabel Lee on July 6th, 2006, 3:48 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: June 26th, 2006, 6:30 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Interesting. Cool subject!
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Post subject: Posted: June 26th, 2006, 8:02 pm |
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Thank YOu!!!!!
_________________ "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
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Post subject: Posted: June 26th, 2006, 9:52 pm |
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I agree with Jax. The poem is very interesting and I love the way you wrote it. Great job!  _________________ 
AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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Post subject: Posted: June 26th, 2006, 10:22 pm |
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Very cute short peom.Very interesting indeed. I love it.
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Post subject: Posted: July 1st, 2006, 4:46 pm |
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Joined: 01 July 2006
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Location: in front of the computer
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short to the point and it's kinda catchy
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Post subject: Posted: July 3rd, 2006, 5:19 pm |
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Joined: 30 March 2006
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Location: Alabama, USA
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well, what can i say? it was to short for my tastes. Leaha, you should work on making your poems longer, not just joting down three lines, i KNOW that you can do better than that!
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Post subject: Posted: July 6th, 2006, 3:48 am |
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How Do Ya like me now !!!!
_________________ "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
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