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Post subject:  Posted: August 1st, 2006, 7:53 pm |
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Elenwë Undómë wrote: That's so good Itarilde!! I love the way you write, it flows so well. Anna Telcontar wrote: Oh, Itarilde, that's beautiful! For someone who's been through that, it's really moving.
Thanks guys! It's still a little rough, but it's really nice that you guys enjoyed it.
And I agree with Elenya about No More Despair's prompt. I thought version 2 flowed better and gave a little better look at the characters and who they were. _________________ Made by Meganelf
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Post subject: Posted: August 1st, 2006, 8:18 pm |
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i did write a story...its called Two Unlikely Companaions..i dont think anyone1 but gollum13 read it
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Post subject: Posted: August 1st, 2006, 8:29 pm |
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You should post some of it. I'd like to read it.
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Post subject: Posted: August 1st, 2006, 11:16 pm |
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Anna Telcontar wrote: Everyone has been doing wonderful work! I haven't yet started on my contest submission. I don't know anything about French Opera...  I'll still try, but I'm a little worried. I found a little about French opera, here's the site. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grand_Opera
Tonight my youth pastor told me that he's been asked to publish a newspaper in the area I live in. He knows I write and mentioned me writing something for the paper! I'm excited about that! lol
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Post subject: Posted: August 4th, 2006, 4:51 pm |
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Elenya and Itarildë thank you sooo much for you comments-i really appreciate it. Any one else-maybe?
^wow that sounds great! i would love my writing to be noticed by more people than my mom and my friend
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Post subject: Posted: August 7th, 2006, 9:59 am |
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ooof, I'm back at my laptop at last - completely brain dead!!!! I need help!
What are we talking about btw??
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 6:39 pm |
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*bump* C'mon, guys! 
Well, Arawn, we've just been doing a few prompts, and talking a bit about our writing.
No More Despair; I agree that version two has more character development and seems more natural. The only thing is, you switch tenses a little at the start, but that's easily taken care of. Maybe, (only if you want to, of course), you could do a slightly better character intro; I mean, is this supposed to be the first scene? If so, I'd describe Jasmine and Victor a little bit better and let the reader get to know Jasmine so they're more affected at the end of the scene. Just my two cents.  _________________ <a href="http://freewebs.com/aryas-eyebrows/" target="_blank"><img src="http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g29/dgn_slayer/footer.jpg" border="0" alt="http://freewebs.com/aryas-eyebrows/"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: August 15th, 2006, 7:08 pm |
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Lately I've been finishing a story for a contest on here. Now I need to get started on a new story for a different contest! lol
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Post subject: Posted: August 16th, 2006, 2:08 pm |
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The problem I often seem to have with contests is that I can't write when someone gives me a theme! It jsut has to go "click" and then something comes out.
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Post subject: Posted: August 16th, 2006, 5:04 pm |
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On the contest I need to start writing for, it took me a long time to come up with an idea. It's about Arthur, Guinevere, etc, and I was having trouble with an idea.
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2006, 8:39 am |
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Hmm, I think that is one of the topics, which has exhausted itself in one way, but on the other hand never can, because it's a legend. If you follow me.
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2006, 8:38 pm |
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I have that problem too, Arawn. I can deal if someone gives me a genre, but if someone just gives me a topic and tells me what to write... I can still come up with decent material, but it just isn't as fun while I'm writing it
MY main problem with contests is that my writing usually turns out too long. recently I dropped out of a writing contest because my SHORT story was 60 pages long. _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2006, 10:27 pm |
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I can't believe I haven't joined yet. I'm a writer.
In fact that's one of the careers I plan to do when I grow up. I've learned a lot over the years but there is so much to learn. I'm hoping when I graduate to start college. I plan to write a whole bunch of fantasy novals, and horse ones also.
I also love a lot of writers such as William Shakespeare, Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, and others.
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2006, 11:35 am |
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2006, 11:39 am |
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Linariel wrote: I can't believe I haven't joined yet. I'm a writer.
In fact that's one of the careers I plan to do when I grow up. I've learned a lot over the years but there is so much to learn. I'm hoping when I graduate to start college. I plan to write a whole bunch of fantasy novals, and horse ones also.
I also love a lot of writers such as William Shakespeare, Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, and others.
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2006, 4:37 pm |
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