umm....so yea, basically, my music theory teacher is insane...thus....this poem was born....usually i have very....erm...strong feelings when it comes to poetry....you know, very deep and well thought-out and meaningful....as for this poem....not so much....don't be afraid.....this is my "i'm going insane out of boredom so i will write random stuff that does not make sense and scare people...." let me know wut u think


Bored as hell,
Taco shell.
Wishin for the ringin
Of that class bell.

This is my rant
Of boredom extreme.
Sparkly pants,
Lined with pink seams.

Somebody help me,
I'm going insane.
Elanor Rigby,
Dancing in the rain.

Eyes glazed over,
Falling asleep.
Red Rover, Red Rover,
Marshmellow-filled peeps.

Forever talking,
Of nothing at all.
A chair is rocking
In the middle of the mall.

Oh my freakin gosh,
Someone kill me please.
Oh, pish posh,
And old moldy cheese.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Well, the first line, I personally would say is not appropriot. sorry, but it's your poem.

I liked the flow though and a very interesting usage of wrods creating a colorfull mind picture. lol

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haha thx jax

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Sorry, I don't mean to be that way I guess I just have high standards and they have been strengthened lately. lol Nice work.

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sry i dont reach ur standards.

thanks glad u liked it(i think...)

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sry jax...i was being a jerk...i had a bad day that day....no excuse, but there it is nontheless....anyways, thx 4 ur comments. appreciated, as always. i'll ttyl.

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NP Sorry to sound rude, that's not my intention.

I know my views are very.... well, different, they always have been and I am sure always will be.

I respect your views and and am never goign to like anyone any less because they dissagree with me. I've been going through some rough tuff lately in relation to these sorts of things and I think it's kinda got me on edge, sorry. And it was a nicely constructed poem.

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as have i....put me on edge as well....and i'm sry for that. no, i ws not offended....more provocted....but i've been that way l8ly, so take it personally.....once again, very sorry for being that way. I've got a lot going on right now and a lot of....things i need to deal with....things from the past that i need to be at peace with....that i just need to accept....and i'm having trouble with that....i'm mad at myself for them...and then i take it out on other people. i shouldn't do that. i'm sry. and now i'm rambling....i guess i'll ttyl

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lol it's nor problem, I forgive you. I also appologize for my aproch it wasn't the best constructed and I can see how it might be offensive.

I will pray that God will heal you in these problems.

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no no, this one is totally on me. not u. and thank you.

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