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Post subject: This life Posted: August 20th, 2007, 11:52 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Well, this one is a bit different that my normal so, take a look and let me know what you think. thnx. *waves*
It's not about me,
It's not about you.
I just want to feel free,
I want something new.
This life does not hold,
Any pleasure within.
It's routs are so old,
I do run them again and again.
I want something fun,
But something helpful as well.
Where there's something to be done,
And when it's done you can tell.
I want something meaningful,
A life with some reason.
But here life's so dull,
From season to season.
So I'll wait for the day,
That life will renew.
I'll wait to hear You say,
"Here, this life is for you."
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Post subject: Posted: August 21st, 2007, 2:19 pm |
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Joined: 23 May 2006 Posts: 1406 Location: Snape's Dungeon.
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Post subject: Posted: August 23rd, 2007, 11:27 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks,  Glad you liked it.
And thanks for the comment as always.
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2007, 6:53 pm |
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Joined: 27 February 2006 Posts: 11433 Location: My Imagination Country:
Gender: Female
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I love it!
"Here, this life is for you, Jax" lol!
_________________  (}--{)Imagination Inspires Ideas -Zandain(}--{) Married Cloud Strife 9/17/08
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Post subject: Posted: September 11th, 2007, 1:50 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks.  Glad you liked it and as always appreciate the comment.
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Post subject: Posted: September 12th, 2007, 8:53 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 1629 Location: Middle-earth
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I think I prefer your usuals, but it's not bad.
It almost sounds like something someone might say to break up with someone.  But I know this feeling.
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2007, 11:35 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Yeah, I personally didn't think it fit to well either to be honest. But thanks for the impute appreciate it always. 
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Post subject: Posted: September 26th, 2007, 8:46 am |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
Gender: Female
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Nice one. I know that feeling... it has a nice flow.
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2007, 11:25 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Yeah, not the best feeling is it? lol
But then again trials make us strong. 
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2007, 4:50 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
Gender: Female
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Very true.
Nice job again.
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